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Sabrina Christmas Stocking
by Paul G Jutras

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Comment by STANLEY MORTON on 09/28/07
I LIKE THE TWIST ON THE ARCHIE COMICS. I HALF EXPECTED YOU TO USE THE SABRINA T.V. SERIES AS THE MODEL. THANKS FOR A NEW LOOK AT AN OLD FAVORITE. DID YOU KNOW THAT THE ARCHIE SERIES HAS BEEN TRANS GENDERED HERE?

Comment by Kim West on 01/01/05
I am a bit confused on a couple of points. If Winnie does not like humans, then why bother to interact with them? Also, if Sabrina appears to interact with humans on a regular basis, then why would she accept a job from a disgruntled witch who has a thing against mortals?

Perhaps if Sabrina had been forced to work for Winnie as part of some deal to save her boyfriend, then I could see herself being trapped by the other witch.

Sabrina's outfit sounded pretty sexy, and Archie/Arlene's outfit was also nice. It might have been fun to see Sabrina change her back, and see if Archie remembered being a girl. A fairly cute little story.

Kim.



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