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Sadie Hawkins Day
by Sydney Michelle

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Comment by WannabeGinger on 10/03/08
HOW......... have I missed this wonderful writing before now???!!  Only two chapters into the story so far and I'm transfixed.... the detail and the atmosphere of the salon and makeovers is truly wonderful and I love it!!  Like the comment from Jezzi belle,  I too can sooooo relate to the circumstance of the guys who,  with persuasion, have come to enjoy the delights of a salon makeover.....
Pure bliss!    Please write another whole story like this one!  LOL WbG xx

Comment by Marlene on 05/06/06
All I can say Sydney is WOW! A great story and universe in which to operate! It would be sooooo cool to see those who would force women to keep their pregnancies if *they* had to endure the process numerous times!

Although I don't have a maternal bone in my body, if I was in this universe, I would most definately be a surrogate for a loving couple like the ones here.

Comment by Louise on 06/08/02
Wow!!!Sydney, you should win a Pulitizer prize for this one!  What a really great story. Thanks so very, very much for the effort.

Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 06/05/02
I was going to wait till the story was complete, but I can't.  What a great story!  Jamie and his/her friends are ME (well. OK, A LOT younger :-), how I think of myself; they have no desire to be women, don't think of themselves as women, but they are coming to just love the feminine lifestyle: T-girls.  I love the detailed descriptions of outfits, hair, and salon visits, and again, I am the same way; I can do my own hair and makeup well, but ooooh, how good it feels to be pampered with a makeover at a salon!  And I love the girl talk; the scene in the hot tub was great!  I just wish I had a supportive girlfriend/spouse like Blake.  Keep up the GREAT work!

Comment by Chris on 05/31/02
This one is off too a great start, I can't wait for the parts that are to follow.  



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