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Sailor Moon Summer Camp
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Comment by sam on 11/24/12
please put more part 2 this story really need second part please write Comment by juliej on 03/28/10 its a great start to what seems to the begining of a great story when can you put more in to it i canot wait untill james starts at summer camp more please Comment by asagjdakgjh on 09/29/08 hey can you make more of this? i am excited to read about the sailor moon camp Comment by juliej on 02/29/08 intresting start moreplease Comment by LINDA on 02/13/08 IT'S THE MIDDLE OF FEB.,'08.HAVE NOT YET SEEN ANYMORE OF THIS VERY PROMISING STORY.AS AN ANIME/MANGA FAN WITH ALL THE TG CONTENT IN THEM HE SHOULD BE OK,IF NOT LOOKING FOR WHAT'S AWAITING HIM AT CAMP.PLEASE,FINISH THIS STORY-IT'S GOT TOO MUCH PROMICE TO WASTE.THANKS FOOR A GOOD START TO A GREAT IDEA. Comment by early june on 07/29/07 Too short. Way too short. You just got my interest piqued and the text ran out. What you have is sooo good. Please don't disappoint by not completing this wonderful start. I may not be too much into airsofting, but I do love biking and have thousands of miles on even my latest bike. I am looking forward to J's great adventure in the Land of the rising sun and the camp of the sailing moon. It should be heavenly:) Comment by chibi on 07/26/07 I cant wait till you finishs this story, its starts outs great Comment by Marlene on 07/24/07 Although I'm a middling fan of the Sailor Scouts, the airsofting is new to me, and to tell the truth all the inside jargon was terribly boring. I'm not all that interested in what type of guns and ammo was used, not to mention what types of cammo James and Candy had. Comment by Pat on 07/22/07 An excellent start, you've got me hooked with the story line and characters but just a few teases of crossdressing to come - well done. Comment by Paula Jutras on 07/20/07 It just leaves you wanting more. Hope the next part comes soon. Comment by Voice Of Reason on 07/15/07 I have got to see more of this. Great start. I can't wait for more. Comment by Jade on 07/15/07 Nice start could have been a little longer but nice start. Hope to see more. Comment by suna on 07/14/07 Don't make us wait too long for the next chapter. |
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