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Dear Sally,
I found your story of Sally the Saturday Girl delightful and most stimulating.
You must have spent much care and attention on your make up and the result is absolutely stunning,  you are a very beautiful girl and I hope you can remain that way for many years to come.
I thought that all your outfits very attractive and illustrated your story perfectly. When you wore the pink floral choker it made you very alluring and it suited you to perfection.
The boots are sexy but they hide your seductive legs and they must have been difficult to dance in ??
I do hope that you can find the time to write some more stories and add your photographs which make you so seductive.
Which photo is the real you?  I adore them all.

Hugs and kisses

Such wonderful exciting stories and the images just make it so much more pleasureable.  Please find time to start writing again. Your talent is so appreciated.

Sally,

I loved the story!  But it does not appear to be finished.  I want to encourage you to start again with more events in the lives of all these women.  

Please, do this, OK???

Thank you,

D'Anne

Lovely story & pictures. Wish I was Sally!

I loved this story, but was left hanging.  
Is there anything I can do to help you take it further?  Bear in mind I have abolutely no abilities in creative writing - in fact, I barely scraped through my "O" levels in English with the minimum possible mark!

If there is anything I can do to assist, please let me know.

Ashley

Yesterday, July 30th was my lucky day = why?  For the first time ever I used the "published this day" feature on storysite and I started to read about Sally and her friends, (part three as it happens).  I quickly started to read from the beginning and got through all five chapters.  I think it was amazing - not only the writing but the photographs too, an unexpected bonus  
 You said at the end of part 5 that it was to be continued and while I think this was probably a good place to end it, I loved the girls so much I would like to read more of their adventures - I am sure there is ample scope.

Thanks once more and every good wish for the future.

Donna  xxx

A truly wonderful and well-written tale.  I always love a story where I can identify with and recognise some of my own past dreams (now thankfully a reality).  I am looking forward to reading a lot more of Sally Stephanie's work in the future.  Cheers!

the story continues in great taste and is very enjoyable to read its amazing how things went annd the transformation to the end well done

excellent start to the story it makes me wonder how far they will go i will comment later on the rest after reading it great start

Lovely stories from a lovely woman Sarah can't wait to read them all.  Teri

Delightful story.  I hope you continue to write.  Tittilating.

That was such awounderfull stoey right the way though from 1 to 5. Let us in on Sallys life as she groues up. So keep on writing.It has filled my mind and heart with such joy, anyway lost love Gail.

The visuals compliment the vivid  scenarios exquisitely. It is easy to relate to Sally, and her reactions are quite appropriate.  Georgie and Laura are spectacularly wonderful characters as is Miss Roberts.  I am curious to find if we get to learn more about Cindy in the next chapter.  I think perhaps we will learn more about Georgie than meets the eye eventually as well.  I can hardly wait for the next installment.  Hugs & Kisses!

Thank you for clearing up the motivation question and the "pictures" incident.  It is so nice to be able to enjoy this wonderful story again.  AND, I learned something; I have always had miserable luck with liquid eyeliner, and I am going to try the 3 dot method you mention.

Sally, as I've told you in our private chats, this is great and I really do want to see you continue.  One minor suggestion is to have an aditor do a scan before posting, but then we've already discussed that.  Otherwise, love I am hungry for more.

Misty

Up to a point I have to agree with Jezzi that the blackmail angle is just too convenient. It should be a process of love and trust not through pressure or force, preceived or actual. Other than that it is a very good story.

Once again I find myself in agreement with Jezzi.  (This is getting
boring!)  Blackmail is such an easy plot device.  Well, so is
consensual feminization, I suppose, but in this case it would have
been more in harmony with the mood established in Part 1.
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--Pervy

I am so disappointed!  I was really really enjoying the story, everybody, including Sally, seemed to be having a good time, but  then came the blackmail.  I thought they were really considerate and nice and actually giving him a choice, but you took the road most travled.  what now, Miss Roberts becomes Mistress Roberts?  These are not nice characters anymore.

Part 2 was even better than Part 1.  I'd love to be put in a situation like this (being a secretary for a woman, and wearing a skirted "corporate uniform" I would love).  This comes awfully close.

Lots of fun! A good quick read with transformation progressing nicely.  But what is going on inside?  What is Sally thinking?  What about Sally's job/career?  What is her/his background?  Single? Unattached ? No family? Please give us a little more reality in your fantasy and we can identify with Sally that much more. Maybe I missed the point and you do not wish to write that kind of story. Appreciated the pictures very much, even though I didn't think they all fit, they were much fun. Many of us, I think, enjoy stories from the other side of the pond and all the different nuances of English  (Irish or Welsh) life.  Why don't you capitalize on that and give more character to your story. All in all a very good start and thank you for sharing your story with us. Hugs, Kristi      

Loved the story, loved the pictures - can't wait for part two/three/four. Please!!!

Niks
xx

What a fantastic story.  You captured pretty much exactly what I always fear/wish could happen every time I buy girl clothes in a store.  The idea of one or more women making sport of pushing me further along as a crossdresser is one that never fails to entertain me.  Also, your choices of pictures were sensational.  I look forward to seeing more stories from you.  ^_^

I may be jumping to conclusions because I have not read the story but It annoyed me right off the hop when it was stated that there is something wrong with cross-dressing and the person involved must be punished.. What about women who wear mens clothes...should they be punished???   I will of course print a complete retraction if this is not case.. I quess I'll know if this isn't even posted...

 Sorry...Very tender area for me..

                          Danielle

Lots of fun! The images added to the story like butterscotch on icecream and every paragraph seems to bring something unexpected. This piece of pleasure seems to beg for more to be written on it. Please don't leave our Heroine & the rest of the staff out on a branch. Thanks for the fun .
Another Brian

Lovely start for a series -I hope! By the way, does Karen need any additional help?  Love & Kisses  Carolyn Renee

the pictures truely added to the story and made it even more wonderful if that's possible. Hope they'll be a part 2 to the story as the end makes it sound like their more to come even though I don't see a TO BE CONTINUE at the end of the story.

Dear Sally,

This is a wonderfully, refreshing story. The pictures added their magical charm to the text. Wouldn't it be great if we all could appear as Sally does? I'm pushing sixty, but I can relate to all that went through his mind when he was looking at that skirt. I'd like to see more of his thinking during this process, that is all the things that go through your mind, when you cross-dress. The story was rushed a bit as events unfolded.

Were those pictures of you, that you used? Love that white dress and white, "heels." Sorry, but I don't like either boots or slng-backs.

I'm looking forward to the, "next time."

Susan

Definitely a good debut! This is a nicely written workplace story that's fun to read. I certainly look forward eagerly to Part Two.

Really the only fault with this was that none of the images displayed.

Best wishes, Andrea.

a wonderful well written tale.  The only thing that disapointed me was that the story was marked IMAGES but the images refused to come up for me.

This story made my week! Wonderful characterization, fun femdom aspects but not too overdone, lighthearted and I can hardly wait for the next part.  You've got a flair for workplace stuff, and as a new writer I have to say Welcome! and I hope this is just that start.