Thanks for a great story. As mentioned by other commentators, there was a bit of male bashing, but unfortunately it isn't so far out there. There are men that do behave that way. Thanks for keeping the sex out of the X rated category - it kept the story classy.

>>"Men. They can't find anything. Come with me."

I guess Teddi joined "the other side" to be on the right side of the sexist-bigoted, male bashing equation. This is your idea of "love"? Yech. :P Bye-eee...

Beautiful, but one little passage hits a sore spot because it is oh so true. In part 5, the author writes:

>>It was better than an hour later when Ronnie and Amy walked into the kitchen, and all Ronnie said was, "Men!"

>>"What!?", Jason replied.

>>"You men are heartless."

Oh well, there goes all of that love, swirling down the porcelain.

>>"What did I do?"

>>"You, nothing. But, Ray broke up with Amy for no apparent reason."

No, nothing -- just guilt by association.

>>"No reason what so ever?"

>>"No. He's even known all along that Amy was bi, and didn't seem to care. And, then today, he tells her that it's all over. No reason. No explanation."

And, of course, women have NEVER done that to men -- that, and much worse. You sure called that one, Teddi. Underneath the deepest love there still lies this brooding mistrust of "the other." What a burden to place upon men, to constantly have to prove that we are not all monsters. One of us does something apparently rotten, and suddenly all of us are depraved. This is certainly a large chunk of the experience behind my experientially based gender dysphoria -- it would be nice to be on the right side of the "monster" equation for once in my life.

I have read most of your stories on the second page. I just love them with all the sensitivity and love that you depict in them. What you write about seems to be the dream of many tgirls. I pray that "somewhere out there beneath the deep blue sky", there are lots of us having that experience.

Many Blessings

Gwen

What a wonderful serial.  I've only read the first five chapters, but this is a winner.  Thank you so much for writing it.  I'll be back for the rest in the next day or two.  And please, keep on writing!

OH OH OH thank you for such a warm and inviteing story.

Even after the first two chapters with nothing out of the ordinary it kept me reading and then the good stuff  giggle giggle wink.

I can see many directions for this to flow so please please give us more :-)