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Same Blouse
by Shalimar

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Comment by great link building on 11/20/13
Xqo9IB Thanks a lot for the article.Really looking forward to read more. Keep writing.

Comment by Silvia. on 06/26/12
Very good story.
Kisses.
Silvia.

Comment by Cork on 04/24/07
Gah.  It's a shame to read 80% of a good story, only to have the last 20% ruin it for you.  The witch history thing didn't need to be so integral to the story, and the whole "tragic end" was completely out of left field when compared to the rest of the story.  It's like Jim Henson wrote a movie, but then Hitchcock came by and re-wrote the last five scenes.  I'm not going to say the ending was *bad,* because I honestly couldn't read it, but it wasn't at all fitting of the rest of the story.



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