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Sam
by Pixy

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Comment by Janis on 09/29/23
Hi ,pity the site closed down,I would have loved to read to a conclusion

Comment by mike on 10/09/21
please write more.  chapter 3

Comment by check this out on 11/20/13
608qFB I really like and appreciate your article post.Thanks Again. Really Great.

Comment by Bruce on 10/23/09
damn i wholeheartedly agree and i normally dont like bro sis relations but yoron is right very HOT, wish i was 50 yrs younger right now, if i was my keyboard would be a mess lol...please continue  thanks

Comment by Yoron on 06/03/08
Awh Pixie my lovely impetuous imp.
Impatiently I thy implore.
Finish this one.

No humiliation, neither do I see abuse.
If one doesn't count their shared kinship.

This one is sensuously hot.

cheers
Yoron.


Comment by Pixy on 12/07/06
Good god, is it really four years since I started this?  Better pull my finger out and finish it!  

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Comment by juliej on 12/03/06
a great story needs to ber reead again to fully understand it well done

Comment by John on 10/21/06
Great story so far.  Will it be completed?

Comment by Stefan on 08/12/06
Pixy - I love this story. It reminds me so much of my own (unsure) youth and imaturity. I don't supose you are going to continue - but thank you for what you have written.

Comment by julie j on 08/07/05
this is indeed a very complex story i would like to see him come crashing down and end up as a girl either being caught or more proberlby his sister deciding to enlight her mother or even bring in lorna to the story of something that happens at her house and he get punished wonderfull story more please

Comment by julie j on 10/24/04
this is a great story surprised his sister was so gentle about it when she caught him &not at all worried great story more please

Comment by Tamara Rand on 07/14/04
An-ti-ci-PA-tion!!! This is ever so much hotter than the drop-your-panties-and-do-it type of story.  The bittersweet frustration and burgeoning sexual tension are absolutely palpable.
Take your time, Dear, but remember that your public is waiting with bated breath.  Brava!
......Tamara Rand.

Comment by Emily on 07/12/04
A very entertaining story line with interesting charactr development and a wonderfully sexy sister.  I look forward to additional chapters!

Comment by Steve on 07/05/04
Very interesting and tender story. A brother and sister relationship based on mutual desire is erotic. Especially when they both are so close to acting on it, but don't. That keeps the allure and expectations going. I hope there are many more chapters ahead, I look forward to them.

Comment by Elaine on 07/02/04
This is a great story, very well written, sexy and sensuous.  Please write more!  

Comment by Annabel on 07/02/04
Lovely story with a nice scenario and a good build up of dramatic tension.

I am not sure if readers from outside the UK will understand the use of trade names such as Irn-bru or Sellotape - you could use expressions such as "can of soft drink" or "sticking tape" instead.

I am really looking forward to reading the sequel.  I wonder if Jackie will go on being so nice or if she is going to blackmail.....

Comment by Carolyn Renee on 07/02/04
Lovely start . Please continue -- I wish that it were my sister or wife and I were wearing silk! Silly me -- I am! Love & Kisses  Carolyn Renee

Comment by Stephen on 07/02/04
Hi this has the makings of a great story. I love the tenderness between sam and his sister. Hopefully you plan to continue in the same vain with the hope of more initmate contact and others geting involed.

Keep up the good work. Steve



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