Thanks for this story, Rob.  I agree with Jezzi - this could have been written by a woman and, yes, I definitely mean that as a compliment.  

A nice Story.

well constructed story of feminine fulfilment at the end

Very, very good story!
Congratulations!
Kisses.
Silvia.

Having read the last few chapters here, I can see Eric's point, but I don't think the back stories are exactly identical.
Also, there seem to be a few discrepancies in the reveal?
It is going to be difficult to keep them separate for any longer.
I guess the stories will diverge when one goes to the "Universe it", and the other goes to "collage". or are you hoping to keep them together as a matched pair?
Oh, and please read the spelling-checker's suggestions carefully...
In general, I think I preferred old books where you would get an occasional completely miss-spelt word, rather than an automatic in-correction.

Note for Priscilla: Colour definitely has a U in it, at least in Cambridge! :-)

(From previous comment -- hit the "post" button by accident trying to change screens):
..."understudying" for "understanding", "by" for "buy", "cloths" for "clothes", "here" for "her" -- and that's just part of Chapter Seven.

There's a serious editing problem here: Part Eight is a repeat of the second half of Part Seven, and after "the end" in Part Seven, there's a fragment of a sex scene that apparently was deleted from the finished story, since it doesn't seem consistent with the final scene.

(Since I'm commenting, the author also has a serious problem with a spellchecker choosing the wrong sound-alike or -nearly alike words.  "Draw" for "drawer" is almost ubiquitous (contrary to a previous reviewer's assumption, this doesn't appear to be a UK/USA variance, just a wrong word choice), but there's "complement" for "compliment", "crash" for "crush",

I love these stories - they are so gentle and English.  I would love to be Sarah with such understanding and doting parents.  More please!

Hi Rob,

Good story but gawd PLEASE.  It's not suspender belt, it's GARTER belt, it's not Tights, it's PANTYHOSE.  It's not draw its DRAWER, it's not cloths it's CLOTHES! it's not Aluminium its ALUMINUM, it's not bonnet it's HOOD, it's not boot, it's TRUNK, it's not knickers, it's PANTIES.  Why is it we "colonists" have to teach y'all ENGLISH? ;-)

Sorry to disagree but how many trimes do we have to read about Sarah's bathing. Take a shower for God's sake  and get a plot to the story.Sorry girls but I thought this story was a real yawner. H

Lovely story, Rob. I concur with Jeff Lyons please complete this. I to have had those feelings. I still get them even now but circumstances will not allow any change.

How I would loved to have grown up as Sarah! Please please finish her story. I love your work, thank you.

Rob, I usually skip the sex scenes; I am so glad I did not this time.  I loved the tenderness on both lovers' parts, and the equal giving and receiving; no power trips here.  Also, I have never thought of blow jobs as romantic.  You wrote them believably so.  Very very very good job.  I would have sworn a woman wrote this, and I mean that as a compliment.

Nice but sort of sad, She knew at such a young age but when on being a boy.