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Scarlet Begonias
by Valentina Michelle Smith

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Comment by Ayoub on 01/05/13
Boom shakalaka boom boom, prolbem solved.

Comment by Silvia. on 12/17/12
Good work!!! I Liked it!
Kisses.
Silvia.

Comment by Molly on 04/22/08
This is not satire -- at least, not by my lights. No, it is out-and-out, screaming, flaming, corrosively acidic, "There, take that!", "I'M SO SICK OF ALL THE BS!!!" ... SARCASM! And it is very satisfying, as a result. :)

Comment by STANLEY MORTON on 10/11/07
TINA, THIS TALE OF JUST DESSERTS HAS ME LAUGHING. ME, I THINK YOU WROTE IT ALL. WHY? BECAUSE I BELIEVE THAT YOU HAVE THE SKILL TO PULL IT OFF. I AM OH SO GLAD THAT IT IS ONLY A STORY,

Comment by Iphis on 04/17/03
A ver funny story.  I have often wondered what happens to the principle of the conservation of mass in most "sci-fi" TG stories.

Comment by Amelia R on 04/17/03
Delightful! A cautionary tale that should be read by all authors of TG fiction.  Nicely done and quite well written.



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