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School Days
by Patricia Anne Anderson

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Comment by laurie on 12/07/14
This is a very good story. I wish it could happen to me.
I to would love to be a girl. But in my teen age days was in the 1960th and it was a big no no for a boy to dress as a girl then.

Comment by Silvia     (from Brazil) on 02/03/10
Mrs. Anderson isn't fair. She told Bradley that he should have thought before doing what he did. But she didn't think before the consequences of what happened to Bradley when she made him dress like a girl. She is evil.
His mother is guilty too. She isn't a good mother. She is evil too.
Silvia.

Comment by julie j on 10/16/04
the stories that you write are very good and enjoyable but please do a spell check it spoils the geat story when things are spelt wrong but overall a great story of a lesson being learned the hard way a bit mean of his mother to spike his drinks  with female hormones but it seems like bradley is enjoying himself welldone

Comment by Jezzi belle Stewart on 06/17/02
You are very good at the type of stories you write, but, as usual, the transition was way to smooth and easy.  This one fooled me, though.  From comments early in the story, I expected him to go along with the week as a good sport and because he knew he was in the wrong, but want to be a boy again at the end of the week only to find that his manipulative and unfair mother had tricked him - the breast form glue would last for several months, for example.  Then he would fight.  I was looking forward to it.  The hint that what I expected wasn't to be was the earring girl saying the studs had to be in for at least 6 weeks; I certainly expected a reaction from Bradley there, even if only a "But it's only supposed to be for a week, Mom.", but there was none.

Comment by Jezzi belle Stewart on 06/17/02
You are very good at the type of stories you write, but, as usual, the transition was way to smooth and easy.  This one fooled me, though.  From comments early in the story, I expected him to go along with the week as a good sport and because he knew he was in the wrong, but want to be a boy again at the end of the week only to find that his manipulative and unfair mother had tricked him - the breast form glue would last for several months, for example.  Then he would fight.  I was looking forward to it.  The hint that what I expected wasn't to be was the earring girl saying the studs had to be in for at least 6 weeks; I certainly expected a reaction from Bradley there, even if only a "But it's only supposed to be for a week, Mom.", but there was none.



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