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School Daze
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Comment by Roy on 03/30/24
A really enjoyable story, hopefully there will be more in the future.😏 Comment by Dwyn on 01/03/19 I just finished all three connected stories. They were very good, sexy too in their understated way. Comment by Dwyn on 01/03/19 A sweet delightful and mildly sexy story. Off to read part two! Comment by Angie on 08/03/17 Hey no fair - finish the story! Comment by Leon on 04/23/14 would like to read more on this story, seems that bobby has taken a liken to being bobbie and would like to continue, and emma with a passionate love for both, do they pan out together for allways. Comment by Bill on 10/03/13 Lovely story. Innocent yet erotic. Bobbie seems to have taken to feminisation like a duck to water. Could we expect a few more parts I wonder? Is gender re-assignment on the cards for our Bobbie I wonder? Will both little girls remain together through puberty and adulthood? Comment by Sylvia B Green on 02/20/13 Loved your story and the British bias. I would have wished for more descriptions of how the undies felt on him. I adore wearing schoolgirl's navy-blue gym-knickers, with their elastic legs. Being a 'St Trinians, sixth form' adict, I can imagine a mature Bobbie in a gymslip, stockings and high-heels. Hope you are still writing. Sylvia. Comment by julih on 01/19/13 brilliant story its a great one for sure love to have a great sequal also please dont keep us waiitng to long thanks Comment by caity on 11/17/11 Wow one of the best storys i really hope it gets a proper sequoll Comment by Lisa Kaufmann on 10/22/10 Bobby you have left us hanging. A great story that needs to be finished. Of course we can all fantasize our own endings but it would be great to read yours. Hope to see that you have stopped keeping us waiting soon. Comment by Robby on 07/28/10 Does any one know Bobbi's correct email address? Somehow we have to reach her and tell her how great it would be to have her publish new chapters of School Daze. She's a great writer, with a good story, so let's hope she will give us the new chapters that are so long overdue. Come on, Bobbi, we need you! Comment by Ricky on 05/13/10 A most enjoyable and well written story. I have also felt it most unfair that girls can wear such fabulous clothes, and trousers if they must, but boys do not have the same choice. Boys in skirts or dresses are ridiculed. Life is so unfair. Comment by robert on 12/05/09 PLEASE continue this story, you have only taken him to the edge. He knows that he feels goods when dressed. He loves exploring the other side of his being and wants to go further. If nothing else he should be taken over the next year, allow him to explore ballet, also allow him, his mother and his girl friend to travel along this journey with their help. Not only with the clothing, but the psychological aspects of his being. Comment by Cindi on 10/25/09 Can hardly wait for the next chapter. You have managed to give real depth to your characters. Real well written. I hope this story has a happy ending, it would really be a shame to see anything go wrong for these two sweet kids. Comment by Theresa on 05/24/09 Great story. Looking forward to more parts. Comment by JB on 04/17/09 Great story. But why stop after 3 parts surely you have more to add to this wonderful tale. Comment by Lorelei on 02/11/09 A boy such as Bobby wanting to put on girl's clothes, redo his hair, don makeup and jewelry and generally appear as a girl for innocent nonsexual fun and adventure is no sign of being "sissified", "degrading", or "substandard". He just realizes that the feminine gender has its own special privileged permitted modes of dress, behavior, and appearance, and he wishes to participate in such, without being "discovered". He now knows that there is a world of dramatically wonderful difference between going to school, taking a walk, and attending a performance as "Bobby" in trousers and doing the same as "Bobbie" with longer, fuller hair; a little makeup and jewelry; and, of course, a sweet, sweet skirt, brief and flying, with even sweeter panties, soft and scant. The net effect is nothing less than exhilirating, effervescent, explosive, glorious, thrilling joy. Indeed, how could one feel otherwise? When a little girl is truly dressed femme, the lower half of her body is usually very lightly clothed and almost completely exposed to the world and the weather. Even with the risks of exposure of her underdainties, she's permitted to do it, she's respected for it, and, if she's truly girly-girl, she loves it, regardless of how beautiful or ugly her legs are. That takes bravery of the kind Emma says Bobby has. Bravery to participate in that kind of life. As others have pointed out, it's erroneous to praise a girl for wanting to dress and appear as a boy, with good motives, but condemn a boy for wanting to dress and appear as a girl, with good motives. Comment by juliej on 01/15/09 good story but i need to re read it Comment by Vicki Stewart on 01/04/09 This is my third time of reading your lovely story. Please give me more. Regards. Vicki Comment by Vicki Stewart on 01/04/09 I'm sitting here writing this email wearing 'MY' classical ballet tutu....So looking forward, to the continuation of this lovely story! Comment by M on 06/03/08 It should have been shorter... And hot pink. Comment by Yoron on 05/21/08 Enjoyed it. Comment by juliej on 05/12/07 a brilliant story about a child a girlfriend &an understandable mother who wants to try to help her son please continue with this story its brilliant welldone Comment by Briar on 04/22/07 Bobbie Taylor, you really ought to try to finish this story, as it is very good. Comment by Vicki Stewart. on 03/05/07 Lovely story from start to finish (so far) I'd love it if Emma gets Bobbie to join the ballet school and talks him/her into wearing a pretty pink tutu and pink tights in their next ballet show, I can't wait for a lot more episodes of this story. Very well written, keep up the exellent work. Regards, Vicki. Comment by Debilyn on 06/15/06 Except for the sex, one of my faves here on the 'site. I'd jump at the chance to be a uniform-wearing schoolgirl for a day or so, right down to the underthings, with a girlfriend guiding me. Comment by juliej on 05/23/06 this was another good installment from the story and is great look forewards to reading more thankyou Comment by rone on 11/18/05 All stories should be as nice as this one ... good clean fun Comment by Katy on 11/07/05 What fabulous stories! So very sweet and tender, but exciting. I can imagine how Emma and Bobbie must have felt to find they could be very special friends. If only stories like these came true for real boys and girls, what a wonderful world this would be. Comment by christi on 02/21/05 a wonderful set of stories I look forward to you finishing the series Comment by Sally on 12/09/04 A really lovely well written story, I just loved it so much. congratulations. Comment by Lisa Meaghan on 11/09/04 Wonderful story! I love the 'sweet and sentimental' ones. :) This one's a keeper! Comment by julie on 04/10/04 what a great story the 3 parts are well written and explained the mother was very sensitive to her son and understood the feelies of boobby this story can go on for a lot longer including a full change from male to female very well written and i look foreword to the next installments welldone more please asap Comment by Rena on 01/13/04 YOu might Know me better as Night Wolf and The first part of My Life story is up sense last time we talked you said people weren't real honest with most of there life event I would like for you to take a look at it! It's under Night Wolf here at Crystals site. In the Mean time I have really liked your stories and know that some times it takes a while for the parts to come to mind in order to be compete however I thinks it's been a while and part 4 should be coming soon I hope! Your a good author I would hate to find out that this story is going to be unfinished! Comment by christina ballerina on 11/14/03 You know Bobbie's just dying to wear Emma's tutu! Please grant him his wish (and mine)! I'm sure Emma and Bobby's mom would love to see him give them a little recital in the living room. Comment by beffy flowers on 11/14/03 I am delighted by this story, and both the main characters seem very real to me. The subtle-but-intense sexual undercurrents are the best part! You have us by the seat of our pantyhose! Comment by anna on 11/13/03 Part 3 is the best. Part 4? Comment by Rose on 11/13/03 A superb third part in which Bobbie is really starting to emerge. Comment by Sydney Michelle on 11/13/03 Nicely written so far. There does not appear to be any plot or character portrayal reason to have Bobby continue to protest about wearing feminine attire or having other "feminine" interests. That does not exclude having activities suggested for him to experience, but he need not continue to repeat the protest "boys don't." You have written Bobby well past that. Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 11/13/03 after part 3: Comment by Night Wolf on 10/31/03 I'm still waiting Part 3 Please send it here soon this is such a lovely story! I want to read more of it I would hope to see up to 10 parts at least. Please Keep it up and I hope you make more like this one and post here! Comment by AngelaJane on 10/30/03 What a lovely sweet story. Just the right mix of plausable and a smidgeon of titilation. Ballet classes and more school visits are a must - how about Guides? Very refreshingly English too. A model for all stories - if only it were true! Comment by christina ballerina on 10/26/03 Great story! Will Bobbie soon find him(her)self dressed in a pink tutu and tights dancing with Emma? Hopefully in the nest chapter! Comment by anonymousOne on 10/26/03 Bobbie Taylor, Comment by mikie on 10/24/03 Luv your second part of the story. Don't we all wish that our mothers were so understanding when our confusions came to the surface? Please let this warmth between the main characters continue to be developed while our young lad slowly evolves into the sweet person we dream ourselves to be. Comment by Nellie D on 10/23/03 A very nice story of exploration by a boy with the love and help of his best friend and his mother. The sweet and understanding tone of the story is a relief from the nastiness that some stories carry. Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 10/23/03 After part 2: Comment by Mardee Louise Prynne on 10/23/03 Part two lives up to the promise of part one. This is a sweet and tender story rich in dteails. DO write more Comment by Night Wolf on 10/23/03 Oh my this was wonderful Please keep it coming! I love this one it really captures the whole spirit of some one going through the troubles to understand why it's all happening and wanting it to continue so he understands it all! You are talented to have started well and continue on with out loosing interest as you tell the story! When you finish posting it all on the site I suggest to make it a book! Comment by Jojo on 10/16/03 Great story! What I especially liked was your attention to story development and important details (e.g., the titilating dance conversation; also, I almost thought our Bobbi was going to get pegged (!) as you described the love scene w/ your oh so delicious description of Bobbi's panties coming off and him raising his buttocks to the task). Comment by wanda on 10/15/03 Sweet, loving, well written, even for us, whose matern language isn't english, easy to read, wonderful! This is a little jewel. Please, make it bigger! Comment by Sheryl S. on 10/14/03 Sweet and satisfying. I can hardly wait until the next installment. Comment by Jill on 10/13/03 Excellent story , More Please (Curtsy) Comment by Sydney Michelle on 10/13/03 Excellent beginning with a nice balance between physical and emotional description. Lots of potential here, not only for the immediate future but beyond in both ballet and school. Comment by sarajane on 10/13/03 As a Brit I loved this story: low key, plausible and very English! I shall await part 2 with great interest - and anticipation. Comment by Angel O'Hare on 10/13/03 Very good start and you have several impressive commenters here already! Comment by Fran on 10/12/03 Bobbie please continue your story, as I am enjoying it. :) Comment by Rose on 10/12/03 Teriffic first part. Bring on part 2 Comment by Pervette on 10/12/03 An old story told in a fresh, new way. Her excuse for dressing him Comment by Laurie on 10/12/03 An excellent debut! I hope you go into more detail about the adventures of Emma and Bobbie. Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 10/12/03 I am looking forward to part 2. Let's get "her" into a bra and makeup and get "her" to a salon! Why do I have the feeling that a.) mom knows and will help her new daughter, and b.) that Bobbie will end up as part of the batllet troupe - Bobbie, not Bobby :-) Comment by Night Wolf on 10/12/03 This is a very good one I am amazed at how much talent you have and how the story Flows so naturally! Please continue this as soon as you can! I hope you have more like em as well! Comment by mikie on 10/11/03 Your story offers a very plausable and different plot to dress up a young lad. And you have us wondering about what his mother comprehended when viewing the two "girls" in the park. Three cheers, Bobbie, for your great start. I look forward to the next part of this story. |
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