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Comment by Jill M I on 10/20/04
This is one of your best stories. Comment by Marci Manseau on 06/05/04 Loved your story, as usual. You've given me hours of pleasure. If you were here, I'd hug you to thank you. Keep up the sexy work :) Comment by Fran on 09/08/03 Hi Jennifer, I enjoyed this story alot. Thank you, Fran Comment by Nellie D on 08/27/03 A pretty good story with no humiliation for the main character. A few but not enough to significantly detract from the reading. Comment by TinaCortina on 08/26/03 Heh great story; we call that format a Texas Scramble in the UK and I have to say that if I could play as good as Andrea....; Anyway, a really 'nice' theme story. Look forward to reading more Comment by Paula on 08/26/03 A wonderful story and I agree with her. Who would want to go to a Superbowl when you can have a retreat as one of the girls. When I read the summary I didn't think I'd like it as much as I did before reading it. You really are a terrific writer. Comment by Andrea Foster on 08/26/03 This was a really fun story, and I enjoyed it very much. I don't play golf myself, but the comments about the experience of playing the lady's game sounded very credible and well-observed. The "best ball" format of the final game sounded a bit odd though. Are there reallys such competitions, or was this just a story device? Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 08/26/03 What a nice sweet story. I know Mark/Andrea's feeling: I never in the world thought of dressing in women's clothes, yet when Ia at age 52, reluctantly put on a dress for the first time for aa part in a play, like Mark, "something clicked" |
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