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Season of Terror
by Tigger

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Comment by Vivien on 08/11/09
Every time I read this story I find it difficult to not go to tears not only because of the Twin Towers but also due to the heart felt way this story is written!  I would blame the hormones that I take but I have always had these feelings anwyay,lol!  

You are a really good writer so please keep writing your wonderful stories ok!?

                       Vivien


Comment by Starbuck on 12/28/08
Reading this story brings back memories of that particular day...

The horrible, sunken feeling as we listened to the radio station detailing events as they were happening.  The sense of complete and total distraction as we attempted to do normal, every-day things.

I work in the book-business and through much of that morning I was supposed to be making calls to publishers, but so many of them are in and around New York... and we were all so distracted that I'm amazed I got through the half-dozen I did make.

I'll always carry this image of looking down at my cell phone sometime late in the morning, in a place that always before and always since has had four-bar service.  Watching the bars wink out one by one until my phone showed a no-service signal as the network was overwhelmed by people calling their loved-ones.  


Comment by Stanley Morton on 06/30/07
Tigger, I just read Brandy's story on Jessica's Story. Yes, it was a good story, but ended too soon. Benny needs to find his place in the world. [perhaps as a suicide prevention counseller] and esse needs to find his artist utlet for his soul.Please Tigger ,one of you need to complete Jesse's story and give Benny peace.

Comment by Stanley Morton on 06/29/07
Will Penny or Benny leave Seasons house? How much must Benny pay for Janey's life? Tigger, you ended the story too soon

Comment by Early June on 05/07/06
I appologize.  I know I am late, as usual.
But I just found this story, or part of one.  Now I must find the rest.  It is so good I must find the beginning an the ending. #10 is obviously a middle part. I just love the way the dialogue is used and how the story flows.  This is really a very good job of story telling.
 Thank you for posting and sharing this tale with us.

Comment by Kristi Fitzpatrick on 12/16/03
Dear Tigger:

  Another well crafted tale. I am really impressed by the dialog during the confrontation scenes especially when Victoria is taken to task by Penny.  There is an overflowing emotion and tension here that is so compelling.  Aunt Jane outdoes herself again as usual and Victoria does plenty to worry us and keep us on the edge of our seats. As well as Penny.  It is so much fun to see Victoria being the protective and fiercely loyal big sister and her undying dedication to that role. Somehow we see into everyones soul so well because of the incredible stress forced upon everyone. Along with excellent writing.

   This is really quality work and I just know I will be reading more of your stories.   Wish that Tante Marie was painted in brighter colors.  And that the sections were larger, though that is a  small gripe.  A compelling, well thought out and captivating tale that many will enjoy. There is a lot of hard work here and I thank you Tigger so very much for this contribution. Tiggers really are wonderful things.

   Hugs,

   Kristi

Comment by Mariana on 08/10/03
Great, ravishing, excellent use of words and style ... Congratulations to you, I can imagine you publishing other works ...

Best wishes,

mariana

Comment by Karina Alexia on 03/25/03
I read first Brandy Dewinters Tales of the Seasons and there i found a reference to your work.  I think both of you are great writers, you have a different style but i like it just as much as Brandy Dewinters.
I have to thank you for one thing that aparently help Benny (you must think in others before you do something bad to yourself).

Comment by Jane Hudson on 06/21/02
I love the storys about the school for boys like Victor They are great and its a very good read .Read the lot from part 1 to 26 .Keep up the good work.I wish I had gone to a school like that.But I do think you would have got me back in trousers!

Comment by Jeremy on 06/08/02
   It's so cool to read how Jessica's big sister came to be...plus, Ben sounds like he'd be real hot, lol.

   I always wondered though if any of these "girls" realized they were gay. That'd be cool to read....that angst added on top of all the other stuff.

Comment by Annie O on 06/05/02
Tigger:
   
     All I can say is that I do hope you have a lot more stories like this in the future. Aunt Jane Rules, in all ways!!!

Comment by Diane Sutton on 05/22/02
This story shows a lot of love and care that was put into it. I just wish it was all posted at this time.

Once you get into the story plot and read a few chapters it's hard not to want this author to continue with what they have started.

I'm sure that there are money more who wish it would be posted sooner than later.

Nicely written and a wounderous tale to tell.

Diane



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