doses this change the win-lost score,one died the other took longer and the love for another women BUT,BUT still antie jane in the cornor of his mind had maintained the trueth of lessons,love haden't died just took longer when every thing else fails go home..

Tigger, great story!!! Please write more on Carol's story. Carl needs to finally confront his dad and end his tyranny.Then Carl can take over the family business and undo his dad's evil.

A Carol christmas-  Excellent story.  You must be one of those authors who just likes to make a person cry happy tears!  Well, keep it up!

             CG Vivien

RE: previous comment.  I meant either voluntarilly finishing up or perhaps somewhat reluctantly because it's  a condition of wedding by his fiancee

Dear Tigger,
    This is about the fourth time I've read this and I teared up just like during the first three.

<< Jane smiled. "Well, when you win your lady, bring her to visit." and then her smile changed to one Donald and almost a hundred other young men would recognize with more than a little frisson of fear and trepidation. "I will show her the family pictures."
His mouth literally dropped open as the full implications of that promise became clear. "You would, wouldn't you?" Donald laughed.  >>

    I would really like to see this happen, with Donald finishing up as Donna at Season's House, perhaps with his fiancee actively involved (sort of like Barbara Anne in "Ken's Barbie") .  it would certainly be a challenge to Aunt Jane and company, the first adult student.  If it's OK with you and you aren't inclined to do it yourself, I'd like to give it a try.

Yay!  It's a very heartwarming story.  I really liked it.  Happy holidays

I feel as though you have played with my emotions like you might have played a concertina - you have squeezed and pumped me and made me cry and at the end, made me laugh.  As a non-believer, when I even felt affected by the ghost of Carol/Carl's mother and singing carols, I knew your skill in playing with the reader's emotions was at the level of genius.  I wish I could do that.

Thanks for the story.

A very nicely done story. Masterfully constructed with quality as is his trademark.

Merry Christmas to all!

Another great set of storys just read number 3 I love these storys tough love but love not out to hurt but help. I just love these story they are great.Keep up the good work.Oh and Merry Christmas and a feminine and Happy New Year.