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Second in Satin
by Joyce Devries

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Comment by Joyce Devries on 08/16/01
Gingerfred Man,

They seem real, because they ARE real, they 1000% happened, even have pics of some, email me and I will send some to you.

The "stories" are litterally transcribes from my diary which I keep a detailed track of all of my "adventures", I have tons and tons of non-sexual stories that I will be eventually posting, but I thought the readers would like the more erotic ones first.

Unfortunately, until I have another date, those are all of the erotic ones for a while.

Comment by Gingerfred Man on 08/16/01
Despite Mike's comment, taking you out and having you satisy your date orally sounds like fun to me.  I like your stories. They seem real, not fantasy like the stuff most of us write.  Keep posting them, please.

Comment by Mike on 08/09/01
I have to say this...your stories do not change much. They have the basic principal of being taken out and satisfying your date orally. That's about it.....



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