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Secretary's Day - Aftermath
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Comment by thisisme on 01/30/14
And we already know by what is written that what she did was unjustified and based upon an anti-male (anti-testoterone) bias. Comment by thisisme on 01/30/14 Well every one is saying it started in the middle but I think the story did just fine since there are few who will read this story who can't already derive the particulars leading up to it. The story is about the dangers of such covert actions and those dangers are always realized too late. The only real question left is what happened to the husband. She used the word 'was' in refering to him so I assume that he has passed on and can speculate that his passing had something to do with her like actions toward him. Comment by juliej on 07/15/07 this story was starting to get intersting but it started in the middle more please Comment by Leighlea on 05/21/07 Ohdear It was just starting to get good (though a tad complicated and disjointed) and then it stopped PLEASE continue. my organ demands it Comment by Rone welles on 11/07/06 Some times bad things happen to people ... we have to live with being differnt and we all have to deal with day to day life... Comment by juliej on 06/13/06 an interesting story but as things were not administered propperly under medical supervision it seem to have escolated into something far more serious good story well worth continuing Comment by Kristi Fitzpatrick on 08/07/05 Enjoyable though it did seem rushed to me. But you did get me hooked and I am wanting for more. I do like it and will be looking for another part or two. If you can, please include some more emotional response and the actual internal conflict going on. Surviving cancer or fighting cancer and all the other questions, would make this a very internal time. Lots of doubts and challenges to be conquered. Lots of self talk and self doubt happy times and despairing times. Comment by LC on 07/25/05 Please finish this story and the cancer is quite important do not drop it. Comment by Angel O'Hare on 07/16/05 Screw Debbie, she has no clue. Anyway, please continue this story? Oh, by the way I am a two time cancer survivor and I can tell you that most people would not find that having cancer in the story in anyway is a turn off. Especially since it is a known fact that abusing hormones can cause cancer. Comment by Angel O'Hare on 07/16/05 Screw Debbie, she has no clue. Anyway, please continue this story? Oh, by the way I am a two time cancer survivor and I can tell you that mosat people would not find that having cancer in the story in anyway is a turn off. Comment by Debbie on 06/28/05 Tip: Drop references to CANCER in your stories. It's a real turn off. |
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