Wonderful story, Karin!  I have a cigarette fetish, too, so imagine how I felt when Tiffany got all dolled up in white and lit that cigarette, especially when there had been no mention of her smoking before!

Well done!  I want more...

Beautifully written, I feel part of Tiffany already and am looking forward to Chapter 4.... will Jim set Tiffany up in her own apartment and help her with her wardrobe as money seems to be no problem????? Will Tiffany stay faithful to Jim or will she expore her femininity with other lovers???? please hurry Chapter 4 along...PLEASE

I am truly sorry if my cigarette comment was offensive and I do apologize for it.  What I was only trying to say was that this story has enough merit on its own and would certainly encourage Karin to continue. I try to be friendly. By the way, it used to be that if you were to click on an underlined and highlighted name there would be a link to an email address. I wonder why I got no response. This might be something for Crystal to fix.

Thanks for your comment.

Cassandra

Cassandra, you think cigarettes in a story are distracting- enough to comment on them?  To some, me in a in particular, it's a very important part of the story.  Stories like this are few and far apart.  I know because I look every day.  You have to search through about 100 stories to find the word "cigarette" in the text.  That's just a mention that a tobacco filled tube of paper exists.  I'd say that less than 1 out of 250 stories have any value for a guy like me who has a smoking fetish.

Hey, its just my opinion.  As a writer, I'd prefer to get a comment like yours than no comment at all, since you are enjoying the story.  But its kind of like telling your red haired best friend that you hate people with red hair, but you like them anyway, but they should really bleach their hair.  If the hair offends you, avoid it all together and focus on the attributes of your friend that you do like.
Keeping it friendly!!
-sv

Hi Karin!
It's me again. I want to join with slimv's comments. I agree with her that the mother's reactions need to be further explored. I would mention one thing that was a distraction and that was the use of cigarettes. I personally do not find them to be at all seductive to say nothing of the smell they impart to clothes, hair, breath, etc. That being said, it is my own opinion and it is your story. I will wait for the next exciting installment.

Cassandra

I just ready ch 3 and I loved it Karin!  I like how your main character is taking the lead in starting the relationship rather than falling into it.  She's the seducer rather than the seducee.  I'm looking forward to seeing what transpires next, especially the relationships with the mothers.
Thanks,
sv

I read the entire story today. It was wonderful and I enjoyed every word of it. Yes, I could and did become Tiffany as I followed the progression. I hope you will continue this tale.

Cassandra

Love it Karin.  The first two chapters are a great introduction.  I'm really looking forward to chapter 3 and beyond.
-sv

Much enjoyed; thank you very much.

Wow Karin,

Superb storyline so far. I can't wait until the next stories. Love the scenario.

Anita