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The Sentence
by Rob Willson

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Comment by Pansy1949 on 02/12/20
Excellent story. I love the way that the horror of Charlie’s predicament dawns on him over the course of the story, as the future life as Shirley the slave maid becomes apparent. There is clearly scope for a sequel, perhaps at the point where Shirley finishes “her” training and becomes the maidservant of the new Principal. Or perhaps she is sold at a slave auction?

Comment by Azerya on 07/11/12
Thanks AnimuLuver. You can call me Kilgo. 8^)Yeah, sorry about the missed weeks, I got overehwlmed a bit and then had to prep for Comic-Con, so I just dropped the ball for a bit. I really appreciate you coming back.

Comment by Silvia. on 03/25/12
You don't like women right?
Ridiculous.

Comment by Gail on 02/11/07
Hi,
A story for the true submissive.  Would like to see less Latex/rubber and see other fabrics such as taffeta and/or lame' when the sub is being used in a more formal setting.  In other words, for the dedicated fetish minded person the type dress is a big, big part of the story.  And Maids dresses and heels are always appropiate in the proper setting.

Gail


Comment by Jessica on 06/24/06
I loved the story.  Hope Rob will continue with this story line with slave Charlie.
Some thoughts about slave Charlie's and next storyline...
I have read that in the far eastern contries the slaves are having their vocal cords paralyzed by a drug that vets use to stop dogs barking. A slave has no need for using their voice anyway.
The next procedure is usually done afterwards and that is the splitting of the tongue like a snake. The slave subject is restrained upright to a post and a medical tongue retractor is used to pull the tongue out and split it with a scalpel.  The reason for this is to give please during oral sex as the spit tongue is able to now massage both sides of a male or female sex organ.
I know this is a little far out, but that is what's happening in the world that most of us know little about.

Comment by Juliette Lima on 06/23/06
A kafka-esque tale full of sound and fury signifying nothing. I just could not 'get into' it. As dull as dishwater for all the violence purveyed.



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