A immotional story and one the loving story.

Simply amazing!!!!!! Thank you ever so much for sharing your talent and may you always be blessed. Don't really know you but my heart aches for your loss. A fighting tribute to your soul mate. I'm sure that their love is still there and shining down on you. I hope you can feel it. Take care.

Hi Lisa!
You were born to write TG stories, and you're one of the best writers I have read.
Keep writing these amazing stories, and never stop it, please.
Love kisses.
Silvia.

Well I might have jumped to conclusions here :)
finishing chapter two I have quickly realized there might just be some slight differences between Baen books naval SF story's and yours Lisa :)

Ah, we will see though :)

Cheers
Yoron.

Lisa be proud of this one :)
It's as good as any book i read in 'Science Fiction & Fantasy from Baen Books'
I expect great things from chapter two :)

Thanks
Yoron.

This tale has Everything!  I think is one of the best SciFi stories I have ever come across, and also one of the best TS tales too.  There is so much here for people to think about, that it will probably appeal to a wider audience as well.  You ought to get it published in book form.  Thank you for giving us all so much pleasure.  A wonderful read.

Briar

The chapter is GREAT!!!!! I am sorry to see this story ending. Like any good stories, there must have a ending.

I enjoy part 13 very much.

I enjoy part 12 very much.

Chapter 11 is a very good chapter.

Chapter 10 is very good chapter.

GREAT part 9.

I am Sooo into this story line. I love SCI-FI, and the interplay between the characters is wonderful!! I am sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for the next installment.

great does anyone know of any more stories like this or about survival on a planet or island

I love a good Sci-fi story and one with a TG element to it makes it all the better.

I just finish reading chapter 7-8 and I LOVE THEM!!!!! I am looking forward to the next chapters.

Thank you.

Amazing space drama!   Love the action as well as the wonderfully strange future you've painted for us.   Perhaps the only drawback is the nail-bitting wait between each day for the next chapter!   I never knew 24 hours could so so damn slow!!!

One thing is sure.  After this chapter I can't wait to see what happens the next time are lovely captian runs across the TSN ships.   And I would LOVE to read things from the viewpoint of one of those ships!   I'll bet after hearing what she does to those that piss her off everyone soils their underware at the thought of running into her.

Thanks for the ride so far.

-j-

This could be one hell of a sci-fi book.Keep on going, a TG story that is more that a TG story.Can't wait for next bit

I just finish reading chapter 5-6 and I love them!!!!!!!

I really enjoyed the story. It had all the elements of a great novel! I for one am hoping this will be a book sized story! I sat and read the entire 1st, 2nd, and 3rd chapters in one sitting. It reminds me a lot of Enders Game, where they explain the technology enough for you to understand what the characters are doing, but not enough to drown you in it, while the characters live their lives and do what they are going to do. A very good mix of action and romance!

Ashley

My what a great story real Sci- fi fast moving story loved it.More please

I say fuck the users!

I enjoy reading an entire story all at once!  I don't care how long it is... if I can't finish it all in one sitting... I copy paste some text into a notepad document and then using copy/paste from notepad... I search for where I left off.

I specially enjoy knowing that the rest of the story is there waiting for me when I return.  To read part 1 today and part 2 3 weeks from now is entirely frustrating!  If these people can't handle a long story I say let them copy/paste it into parts!

The age of the 2400 modems is over!

Dayna.