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The Service
by Jane Hudson

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Comment by Pervette on 04/04/04
I found it a very powerful story, but sadly in need of editing for punctuation & sentence structure. A story as good & as moving as this deserves better care.
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--Pervette

Comment by Sheryl S. on 04/02/04
Quite sad and disquietingly dramatic. It was a bit abrupt for my personal tastes, rather disarmingly so, I thought -- although perhaps that was your intention.  So much anger from someone who had been herself treated rather kindly -- I understand that she's driven to this by the needless mistreatment and torturous hell that her friend was subjected to -- still, the fulcrum seems just a tad off-balance to me.  Certainly worth reading, though.  Thanks for sharing this with us.

Love and Hugggs,\
Sheryl

Comment by Paula on 04/02/04
wonderful story dear



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