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Serving Sarah
by Jennifer White

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Comment by Mandee on 12/13/07
Hi Jenn
  Thank you for this compelling story. Though you often repeat a theme, you manage wonderfully to tell a neww story (and all of us little dears, just can't get enough of them).  
   Sarah is a very forceful and smart woman who knows how to bring a man to his knees, figuratively and literally.  In fact, she seems to be like Solomon in her asking her husband to make choices: a story of a Queen with 'Kingly' attributes.  Loved it.
Hugs
Mandee

Comment by juliej on 07/23/07
an intersting story of control with a twist well done

Comment by Tiffany on 05/25/07
I had to come back and read it again to finish it the first time it was to much i'm not into these kinds of stories that much but when i read it again it is nice to see that everything turned out all right in the end.

Comment by juliej on 03/05/06
a hard wearing story a very great warning to people who try to pull thre wool over the wives eyes a lesson learnt well but has it been learnt sarah was to soft on hime knowing well he had affairs if it was me i would have changed the bedroom into a cell with bars on the windows and a secure door as well as chaining him up at night the story was excellent and well worth reading well done



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