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The Session Part One
by Marco

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Comment by Moro on 07/11/12
Yes, those mighty Chinese heonmges with all their new military hardware must quake in their boots before the imposing figure of xpat . . .I confess I tend to like atheists excluding the snarling pimply teenage ones that I've witnessed on discussion boards in days of yore.  In a social situation, I will tend to gravitate toward the group of sardonic, cynical types who often turn out to be atheist or agnostic. That probably (as in so many other instances) reflects poorly on my faith. There's probably something in Psalms or Proverbs about that, like  Walk ye not in the way of the wicked, nay, nor followest thou the scoffer, neither he who sayest of the LORD Almighty,  There is none in heaven who watches or judge, so let us doest whatsoever we wanteth.' Yeah, verily, their way leadeth unto destruction and their path unto Sheol.

Comment by juliej on 12/24/07
intresting context well worth more

Comment by Marco on 02/13/07
Sod off Mitzy, I was only learning to write.. I never claimed to Be a writer when I started You know..But My latest works are really quite good...mail me direct and Ill blow yer skirt up... Tiffany@allmighty.fsnet.co.uk  

Comment by Vivien on 12/24/06
Whatever blows you skirt up I guess! That is if you are lucky enough to be wearing one,lol!

Comment by Salonfix on 12/20/06
Oooooh baby, yes yes yes.  Don't stop now!  This story is going to be just awesome and I am hoping he has a salon appointment along the way where he is forced and bound for the round trip.
thanks!

Comment by Mitzi on 12/17/06
Awful, and very poorly written besides.



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