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Seven Pills
by Ida N. Tidy

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Comment by MonaR on 07/08/04
I truly enjoyed both parts of the story.  I am anxiously awaiting to see ongoing adventures of Jason/Cailin and Jessica/Candi (plead, plead, plead).

Nice storyline and a great read.

Comment by Paula Jutras on 08/18/02
truely a wonder story with an  enjoyable twist.

Comment by Nellie D on 06/29/02
A different twist in the change caused by chemical agent. And the reason for the change is both selfish and not selfish. Selfish because he wants to keep her in his life, unselfish because he sacrafices himself to to it.

Very good start please continue.

Comment by Amber Chalise on 06/29/02
Good story and the first that I've read in weeks. I like the direction its going and where it could go.

Comment by Rose on 06/29/02
An exellent first part, I like the content of the story.
Please continue with the second part so that readers can see what happens with the taking of further pills.

Comment by X on 06/29/02
Keep going.



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