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Sex Roles 101
by Dana Lange

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Comment by Dawn on 11/29/14
well written and well crafted erotic story . Well done

Comment by Maggie on 07/11/12
Wow!

Comment by juliej on 06/08/06
a good course one i would like to try out the story is interseting and should progress well look foreward to the next part

Comment by Vivien on 01/07/05
Well, it's like the others said but like they also said it is fantasy!  So where is the rest of the story?  Please do hurry! I'm hooked on it now! I think that it would have been great to be able to just throw on some femmy clothes and just walk right out of the doorway into the wolves den and have no real fear but it never seems to happen that way now does it? It's a nice thought though!

Comment by Sissi Riki on 02/01/04
Great story. I had 2 female roomates in college tthat would dress me up like Dennis, we had some really fun times and I sure miss that. I wish I was denise. Hope you write a part 2 to this story. Sissi Riki in S. Fl.

Comment by Dancer on 12/07/03
The story is/was very well written. As for content, well, it's a fantasy right?
Would like to see more realisim as far as the coming out part is concerned. In other words not so much sluttiness in dressing as RT girls wouldn't be caught dead looking like that.
I think the auther is trying to convay the typical fantasy, thought's of looking slutty rather than what GGs look and act like. After all the story started out trying to teach men what it's like to be a RT woman and all that goes with it.
But Hey! it's a great story and is well written.

Comment by Pervette on 12/06/03
I remember enjoying this when the first 6 or so chapters appeared
some time back. I agree with Jezzi that slutting themselves up is
a bit unlikely (well, highly unlikely), but hey, this is fantasy,
right? I notice that the story details say it is complete, while
the story itself says To be continued. I hope it will be; it's a
diverting fantasy.
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--Pervy

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 12/05/03
Well written, and I love the concept!  However, I just can't imagine in a college class, as their very first assignment, dressing the "girls" up in slut gear (at least slut was the adjective used for Jesse) and taking them clubbing; it just blew away my suspension of disbelief - no learning of skills, starting out in normal clothes, etc.  What happened to the two weeks gradual transition?.  This was like throwing a baby in the deep end of the pool and just hoping he instinctively knows how to swim.  I can't imagine a professor allowing this and certainly not allowing two other students to monitor/watch out for them (Which they did a bad job of, allowing the "girls" to leave alone while they flirted), it's more like one of the currently popular reality shows.  



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