This was a nice read, and thank you for using proper spelling and grammar. The ending was a bit bizarre. Who in the world is Kevin?

  Good story and well written except for the end which is totally confusing.

  Nicely done and well thought out .... your talent is showing
...thank you for writing for us weirdos ....
peace Rone ..

Great story but the ending through me for a loop as Erin fainted and then woke with Kevin. I felt it left out a lot but still the story was great.  Like slim V said a good story without so much sex involved.

                     Vivien
                 

Really enjoyable story.  Interesting to see Starhawk writing from the T's POV this time; nicely done, I think.

Doesn't exactly match my expectation of Erin's high school year as she was described in Basic Needs, but of course that's the author's call to make, not mine.  The characterization seems satisfactorily consistent, though we'd perhaps be able to say that with more certainty if we knew how things went for Erin with Mark at the end of the flashback.

In any case, Shawn/Erin certains deserves a solid position among Starhawk's intelligent, articulate and emotional narrators.

Eric

Hey Starhawk,
Nice story.  I can tell it was a labor of love for you when it wrote it.  I think you did a nice job writing from a teenage perspective.  It gives the experience a fresh and new look.  I especially liked how the character's dealt with the high school issues.  Some people are mean and others are more understanding.  I'm glad you wrote a story that focused more on romance and acceptance than on sex.  You did a great job with it.

Thanks,
sv