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She Likes It More
by Jennifer White

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Comment by Christin Dresser on 04/25/12
Author feedback; ‘She Likes It More’ is a must read. I give it 5 stars!
Note to Readers: Do not read the reader comments further until you’ve read the above titled story first.

Dear Lovely Emma,

    Thank you for sharing with the readers your incredible story of your five week journey that began your transition from a ‘he’ to a‘she’.
Recently, I found myself all alone at home for the weekend. After my bubble bath I dressed for bed slipping on my short sleeveless baby blue Vintage Nightie. The sleeveless nightie is made of soft nylon with a top layer of see through chiffon and has matching panties. Emma, you’d probably consider it rather plain with its simple bow at its scoop neckline, but its wide boarder of exquisite flowery lace at its hem is to die for. I’m sure you would like it. I had on my breast forms but I was not wearing a bra.
I wanted to do some reading in bed before turning in for the night so I logged on to Crystals’ site. Rather randomly I found your story. I read the first page on line that concludes with your wife asking, “What are you doing with my bra?”
Emma, that got my attention. I waited for the printer to print a copy of the written text of your story. I propped up some pillows so I could sit up in bed and pulled the covers up over my legs. Now quite comfy, I began to finger myself while I continued reading your story.

    As I read on I discovered this to be a beautiful love story about two people named Emma and Jada who love each other and cared for one another so deeply that they would do anything humanly possible to make the other one happy.
When I read your story Emma, I learned that Jada is the love of your life. She taught you with loving kindness the finer points of being a girl; helping you toward becoming the woman that you always dreamed of being.
You made it clear to the readers that Jada loves you so very much and only wants to make you happy. You describe how she truly gave of herself.
She unselfishly implemented an exciting plan for your feminization. I too became aroused when you told of the sense of ‘danger’ and the disbelief that you were wearing female things at work. I was so envious.
She taught you how a girl really pampers herself; and how about the many surprises she had for you. You said so yourself, you liked her surprises! They always ended up being something really exciting for you.
I read how Jada was not afraid when needed to show you some tough love. She had you strip down below the waste and close your eyes for the latest of her surprises. You opened your eyes to see what she had put on you. It was a chastity belt!
Emma, you seemed hesitant at first, but Jada reassured you and told you “Don’t worry honey.” When she put on the cover that went over the chastity belt you said it looked like you had a pussy. Do you remember what she said to you? “Girls get wet when they get aroused, not hard.” I was wet myself and nearly came in my panties. Naturally she was right. She was just trying to help you understand what it felt like to be a woman. It seemed very important to her to show you that.
Emma, you are very lucky. Jada loves you so much.

    The readers learned how really thoughtful Jada is. When she called and met with Kelli at your office to tell her that you were transitioning to womanhood; she wanted to make sure you would be accepted as the loving sexy woman that you are. Your boss turned out to be very kind and supportive as did all of the girls in the office. You had Jada to thank for that!
That very night with your chastity belt still on she used your vibrator on you, first teasing you all over with it, arousing you and then penetrating you as she fondled your breast forms. She assured you, “Soon you’ll have a pussy, so you can feel what I feel in bed.” Has she always thought so positively? Unfortunately not many wives would do that for their lover.
That turned me on so much when I read those few sentences; I just had to re-read them several more times. I turned onto one side and inserted my own vibrator into my male pussy. Out of respect for you Emma, I restrained from rubbing my clit and shooting warm cum all over myself! It didn’t feel right for me to do that at that moment.
This is such a beautiful love story, I couldn’t put it down!
I learned that it was important to Jada to teach you discipline. Emma when you were hasty with your new things she insisted that you carefully put all your new purchases away.
When you were so anxious to wear breast forms before she felt the time was right; Jada calmed you down, saying simply “soon.”
When you complained, “I thought I was going to be a DD girl,” Jada taught you how to be patient. “You will be in time,” she cautioned. “But first a girl develops small boobs. It’s only later that she gets big. So you will start small, and gradually fill out your bra.”
I think that Jada is wise beyond her years and that yes Emma, she loves you very much.

    It seemed evident during the telling of your story that even during moments that you were uncertain about whether or not you wanted to complete your transition and become the woman Jada knew you wanted to be; she had faith in you. More importantly she seemed to understand how desperately you needed to become that woman.
Yes, her feelings were hurt briefly and she said as much. Emma you made that clear. However, you listened to her appeal and deep down I think you realized Jada was right and knew what was best for you. She mapped out these plans for you and believed that the path she set out for you was right, not only for you, but for both of you as a couple.
Jada took the time to take you shopping often times not buying anything for her. Emma, you were in heaven being a woman full time, wearing all the sexy things you had always dreamed of, wearing makeup, plucking your eyebrows, wearing jewelry, skirts, pretty blouses, lingerie and heels, all that she had picked out for you. Again, I was so envious of you.
Jada is also very lucky. For you to choose the path that she thought was the best for you, who had such life altering consequences riding on your decision, exhibits how much trust you have in her and how much you truly love her. Emma that took courage.
You certainly didn’t want to ruin her fantasy; after all it was your fantasy too.
When Jada detected, “just a touch of male pride in you,” Emma it was you who took the imitative and asked, “What can I do to get rid of it?”When she offered a solution you indicated how eager you were to burn out whatever maleness you had left. She was so kind, offering to help you like that and you were so willing to give of yourself.
We the readers knew that you didn’t mind the red maid’s outfit and all of its frilly lace trim.

    I was breathless as you continued to tell us your beautiful love story.
As the saying goes, ‘good things come to those who wait.’ On that day when Jada told you to call in sick your heart leapt when you arrived at the plastic surgeon. Emma your wait was over. “Today, you’re getting your implants. You’re going to have real boobs,” Jada said. You were quivering as you lay on the table, but you were brave as the doctor administered the anesthetic. You showed your faith and trust in Jada when you went through with the procedure. You had waited for your DD boobs and now finally Emma, you were a DD girl at last.
As you were awakening in recovery you told us you could hear Jada and your doctor lay out the final ground work for your total transition to womanhood. In addition to a variety of female hormones, estrogen, a female sex hormone was prescribed and also a testosterone blocker used to block the male sex hormone. Your doctor told Jada that the testosterone blocker “will chemically castrate her.”
They made plans Emma for you to return in about a year and “we’ll complete the job.” You knew this meant that the last trace of your former maleness would be removed, castrated and “soon you’ll be a real woman!” This prospect did not seem to bother you at all. I think by then Emma, you had learned not to question Jada’s judgment or her plans for you. You simply cried tears of joy.
Emma you are very lucky. Jada loves you so much.
The faith and trust you had in Jada was rewarded many time since you received your DD breast implants. I was so excited for you Emma, when you expressed the joyous ‘first’s’ you experienced with your new boobs. The first time wearing a low cut sweater, to show off your new cleavage. The first time going braless, so the shape of your nipples would show through your shirt. The first time going to the beach wearing a bikini. I know what DD breasts look like. I have them; not on me, but on my wife. Again, I was so happy for you but even more envious.
This is a great love story; I loved it so much. I’ve re-read it often since that night when I first came across it. You have me imagining that I am you!

    Emma, is a sequel in the works? I certainly hope so. There seems so much more of this beautiful love story for you to tell!
How did your last surgery go? Surely Jada was there when you woke up in recovery. With your transition complete, I want to hear you tell what it was like when the two of you examined for the first time your new pussy.
What lovely wedding dresses did you and Jada picked out to wear when you reaffirmed your wedding vows? I know I would choose a long sleeve gown, wanting to cover every inch of me with silk and pretty lace. I’m sure your readers will want to hear about what veils you wore and the sexy under garments too. Did you or Jada have a train?
When Jada was ready to get pregnant, did the ‘milk’ that she collected and saved from you do the job, or did you need to find a nice man to get her pregnant?
Emma what did you and Jada have; a boy or a girl? What name did you choose for your baby?
As for a nice man Emma, now that you are a real women, do you have any desires to make love with a real man?
Will Jada risk losing you and give you the ultimate gesture of love; finding you a nice man so that you may experience at least once what it is like to have a real man’s penis inside your pussy?
Emma, doesn’t a real woman love having a real man’s penis inside her?
This is a beautiful love story Emma; I hope you write the sequel soon. Your readers are looking forward to all of the luscious details.

Hoping your love for one another is a lasting love,
Christin Dresser


Comment by juliej on 07/27/07
what a way to go good story

Comment by Rebekka on 07/18/06
Lovely story, dear Jennifer. A lovely dream for moi. Thanks, love

Comment by Early June on 04/15/06
It was nice to see one of these "wife feminizes husband" storie end on a happy note.  I am so jaded, I was still waiting for the other shoe to fall while reading the closing verse.
Unbekievably good job.  Thanks again for posting this for us.

Comment by SassySue on 03/27/06
Thanks to Jennifer for writing and posting a wonderfully warm and entertaining story where the hero(ine) gets everything she wanted even if she didn't consciously know it.

Although, it was highly unrealistic in real life, it was perfect for a fiction story.  It was nice to see a story where the wife helped her husband become female out of love and not out of a desire for revenge or domination.

SS

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 03/24/06
Wow.  I was all set for a Vickie Tern ending.  And here you give us a completely happy ending.  Thank you.  I am always in awe of your ability to write femmehorror stories to total love stories and all inbetween.

Comment by priscilla on 03/23/06
Jenny,

You write such wonderfully warm stories
That was my dream!!!
Such a pity cant happen in RL

Keep writting
Love pris
http://www.freewebs.com/sissy4u/



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