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Shelly Plays Tennis
by Carla P

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Comment by Diane Morrill on 10/14/09
A "real" story if ever there was one... and a set-up all the way. Nice maneuvering!

Comment by Bill on 05/16/09
Outstanding story...I am only regretful that you have just the one story available.  With your writing talent, you should be entertaining us with more.

Thanks for the great writing.


Comment by jimmiec on 04/15/09
Dear Carla: Your story is a delight to read. I appreciate upbeat stories that leave me with a smile. I was sorry that it had to end but the ending was perfect. Please write some more.

Comment by Silvia on 06/04/08
Hi, i'm from brazil, and loved your story.
You didn't talk about sex all the time, you just write
a lovely and great transgender story.
Thank you, and please write many many many more storys.
kissesssssssssssssss.
Silvia.

Comment by Janice on 04/17/07
Loved your story. Shelly finally found true herself and I am sure she is going to have a great life with Phil. Hugs, Janice

Comment by vero on 09/30/05
It was very cute i liked it a lot

Comment by Sarajane on 08/30/04
This was a great story, and entirely believable too.  Shelly's gradual recognition, acceptance and rejoicing in her situation was beautifully written.  More please!

Comment by TiffFox on 08/29/04
Excellent story

I hope you write many more

it was great to read a great story with characters with depth and motivation

Comment by Francine on 08/29/04
Hi Carla  :)

You told a very good story.
Thank you
Hugs, Fran

Comment by Paula Mortenson on 08/29/04
Great story. liked the believable characters and the (almost) realistic setting. Write again, it'll be well worth reading.

Luv

Paula

Comment by Eric on 08/29/04
Nicely done.  Glad you eased up on the coercive elements before the end -- Shelly (like most protagonists) is a much more attractive character when she has at least some control over her destiny.

Comment by anonymousOne on 08/28/04
Carla P,

Neat story. Thank you for the evening of entertainment.

anonymousOne



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