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Shemale Supermodel
by Charlotte Bollinger

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Comment by Silvia. on 07/16/11
Very bad story.
Comment by ashley on 07/11/10
this is a good one. I look forward to the next episode - - -
Comment by juliej on 08/10/08
good story fast paced but intersting
Comment by Stefan on 06/22/07
Oh my!! What a delicious story. The mind does boggle at the thought of a 10" dick inside a pair of silk french knickers. Loved the story - wish I had been so traped.
Comment by sarah elizabeth on 01/02/07
Wonderful story, looking forward to the next chapter.  I'am very jealous of him/her, being transformed into a sexy, beautiful womn/model.  Keep up the good work.  Very sensous story.
Comment by juliej on 05/06/04
a great story almost as if it had been planned by his aunt&uncle, well i must say i am looking foreword to the next part well written&well done keep up the good work in the next part
Comment by quaddel on 01/11/04
Please write the next chapter!!!

Your story is one of my TOP 10 stories.
Comment by Jill on 07/05/02
I thought it to was a good start. Like others have said just use spell check and you will do great. Can't wait for the next part.
Comment by Diane Sutton on 07/03/02
A good start with the story and I kind of agree that the spelling and grammer need attention.

However, you should continue with the story and with improvements I'm sure it will turn out just fine.

I for one do not have a problem with using names of real people and for those who know this is just a fantasy story they will understand as they have a real reference to see what your character looks like.
Comment by Pervette on 07/03/02
This has all the makings of a terrific story.  But the spelling
is so atrocious (looks as if it had gone through a spell checker,
because all the errors are homonyms) & the quotations so badly
punctuated that it's just barely readable.  Aren't you proud of
your work?  Don't you want it to look its best?  Don't you want
your readers to enjoy it?
.
In the words of Isaac Asimov,
"Take it from an old war-horse, if your spelling and grammar are
rotten, you won't be writing a great and gorgeous story.  Someone
who can't use a saw and hammer doesn't turn out stately furniture."
.
Pervy
Comment by Trebor54 on 07/03/02
 I hope you have where Victoria gets just revenge on her Aunt and Uncle. Oh that's right. Most of the story's here are about forced feminization and the person eventually loving it. Get real!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Comment by Bobbi on 07/02/02
Sorry I don't like that you used a name of a real supermodel for your femme character.


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