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(She said) Something About Tulips
by Bright Eyes

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Comment by Silvia. on 05/14/11
DISGUSTING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Comment by Connie on 04/23/10
What a story ! Since I don't believe in hypnotism it really sounds like it could be real.
I especially like the part were he or she is on the run.
I know this feelings too well.
Is there somwhere a hypnotist vacant?
I like to turn me in so he/she can perform this magic on me.
Let me know when my desires can be full filled.
Great story.

Love,Kisses

Connie.


Comment by john on 06/17/09
What a great 5 part story . Loved it and I got right into Hectors shoes, mmmmmmmmmmmmmm

Comment by Eve on 10/06/05
It's a wonderful story. For me the best part is when Hector run away. It is easy to identificate us with the hero, as it reproduces a very common fight against our desires. I love your stories.

Comment by TiffFox on 07/28/05
Excellent story, especially the warring sides of hector during his 'escape',  and the twist at the end was great


I was also hoping for a continuation of Hypnotherapy

Comment by Ted on 07/22/05
Wonderful images beautifully crafted. Please continue the series. My wife is just as interested in Kate's future as I am in Hector's. We can relate to what both have experienced to this point and are eager to see how Ophelia's hypnotic powers will continue to affect them. I must confess, after we read each read the series, I had the feeling that my wife may be identifying more with Ophelia than to Kate. Hmmmm!

Comment by Hebe Dotson on 07/21/05
An unusual -- and excellent -- story. I hope you'll write many more.

Comment by Rita Mondray on 07/20/05
We all know exactly what she'll chose! Please continue!

Rita



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