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Shirley
by Connor

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Comment by Uddevil on 07/09/12
Absolutely first rate and copper-bttomoed, gentlemen!

Comment by Silvia. on 08/19/11
Very good story.
Hugs.
Silvia.

Comment by rone on 09/28/05
 Well  done and a  fitting  end  justice was done what a shame kids would have to resort to a problem  but with both parents allowing
that to continue what else could be done  ..... nice clean justice
no taxpayer money spent and they lived happly ever after....

Comment by Tanya Lynn on 07/17/03
I loved this story.  I think it had the perfect ending.  Every story doesn't have to end in a sex change.  I also would have probably done the same thing.

Comment by solon on 06/05/03
Nice neat summation.....good for Charley he rescued Shirley. However, these affairs always more complex then just 'good versus bad' ....the mother, who has a good, regular job, maybe provoked the father somehow, if only to revenge against his being shown to be a loser, in front of their child, thus making the girl a target(?)..... anyway killing the guy is always easiest solution, but honestly: contempt for god and law and the sanctity of his own child had to be taught to him ....

Comment by Night Wolf on 04/24/03
This is the first one that I read that resulted in this manner.  I t was nicely thought out and took in a lot of considerations of all the characters!

Comment by Charlie on 04/06/03
A desrving end to a villain. Sex of any kind should not be forced on anybody, particularly a child or young person. A good story with a fitting end.

Comment by Jane Hudson on 01/01/03
SCUM like that should  be put down like mad dogs .Pity it was over so quick.THERE IS nothing WORSE than rape except when the dad does his child .I think that filthy like that should be used for medical tests not animals.Good story great to see him get his and get it good.She has got a great friend there.Pity it could not be like that in real life .But as you know he would get away with and the poor kid would go down if he tried to kill him.

Comment by Jennifer on 12/31/02
Wow!

Quite a different kettle of fish.  It was a good read.  Kind of a coward's way out, but we are talking about teenagers that are really not adept at planning entrapments.




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