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Shock to the System
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Comment by Silvia (from Brazil) on 04/18/09
As always you wrote a lovely story. Comment by Briar on 04/14/08 I liked the story for several reasons - the supportive behaviour of the others, the exploration of how even after a change in physical gender, the orientation remained as before. This is generally true, but most people exploring accidental changes have overlooked that. The general tolerance, and the few that were not getting their cumuppance. Good characterization, good pace of plot - it would have been so tempting to go into details of dressing and attitude adjustments, but that would have made it boring. All told, a well told tale by a competent author. Thank you for sharing it with us. Comment by (AJ) Eric on 11/04/05 Nicely done. You've made some choices here -- what scenes to present and which to summarize, character reactions, that sort of thing -- that strike me as different from the norm and therefore more interesting. Comment by SassySue on 12/31/04 Great story! Well written and entertaining. Hope, one day in the not too distant future this method of sex change does become feasible. Comment by Kristi on 11/22/04 P.S. Sorry - just noticed first comments by another Kristi. Sorry if confusing Comment by Kristi on 11/22/04 Really really enjoyed it! Love exploring through your story both the technical & emotional details .. & looking forward to whereever you lead us :) Comment by Kristi Fitzpatrick on 11/22/04 Hi again Julie: |
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