Also, back in England, will Paul keep all woman clothes in his closet? And will Sally return after work?
And will Cathryn give Sally the initiation item, the lilac favourite lingerie set that make him/her so sexy???

Excellent story!!! At first, it seems only a classic forced feminization/blackmail story, but then it reveals as a gradual and confident deep dive of Paul/Sally into the girls' point of view of the world, with its advantages and disadvantages...and, most of all, a better relationship with the sister (like her change of personality) and the start of a love story.

I really love this sentence by Cathryn in part II: "That is my favourite set of lingerie, so be careful when you put it on". She gave him her precious lingerie set in a lilac colour, the most favourite, most luxurious and sexiest one, advising him to take special care of it while putting on (as if it was Paul's)....thus foreshadowing her future boyfriend's growth as a beautiful girl!!!

PS: I really would like a sequel about the adventures of Sally and the girls gang in New York and at theatre, but it's 11 years ago so it's hopeless

9kyo0k Thanks again for the post.Really thank you! Fantastic.

3MHxas Im obliged for the post.Thanks Again. Really Great.

TBDE1m 52.      "The road will be overcome by that person, who goes." I wish you never stopped and be creative - forever..!!

I loved the whole story - pure escapism.... but,  heck,  we can all dream!  Love Ginger xx

Bad story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Silvia.

Good luck,

Thanks I really enjoyed your story.

I've loved and enjoyed the story so far, of course John just loves the the way Sally behaves. However I've also noticed that nothing has been added since 2001. Too bad it's been a good story to this point. I was looking forward to a few more escapades of the gang but especially of Cathryn and Sally in New York and then again back in England where Cathryn could be counted on to enticed Paul to become Sally again and wear all those beautiful clothes that they bought in NYC.    
Paul should be allowed to make proper love to Cathryn and maybe Joanne cold meet a fellow to marry and have Paul/Sally be a bridesmaid.
Thank for the story so far.
Jean

after 3:  What bitches!  From their amazement, it's clear they expected him to look like a boy in a dress and they all were quite willing to let him be humiliated.

Hi Annalise  :)

Hon, such a fine story, did you ever follow up with more?

Hugs, Fran

a very good story now i have read all 3 parts this could be expanded to see how jack got on through out the rest of the trip in New York, and how well he took with the rest of the girls I wish that this would happen to me but alas it never will well done please think about another part to this story

excellent story next part please

Absolutely beautiful work. Many stories get so involved in sex that the whole point of the story is lost. You have tastefully put a very nice story together. I can't wait to see more!!

Absolutely beautiful work. Many stories get so involved in sex that the whole point of the story is lost. You have tastefully put a very nice story together. I can't wait to see more!!

A very nice story and I was happy to have had the opportunity to read it. I enjoyed the way the girls got Paul to change into the girls clothing and then have a wonderful time shopping for other clothes.

I think that the story can be continued as it has a lot more things that the author can bring out as Paul now Sally continues to enjoy the feeling and friendship of the others.

A few grammarical errors and one or two mis-naming of character but other wise a fairly good story. I can't wait to see what happens next.

you can not stop now, these are great, wish I was the one that was with the gals,

Keep the story coming, ignore Dawn, never take comments from people who can't spell.

Great start!  Don't keep us waiting

Don't leave us waiting too long for the rest of this storey. So far it's good and certainly has potential. I look forward to the next instalment.

What a pointless load of Shiite, setting a scene is one thing but forgeting to pull back the curtain is a travisty