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Comment by washington dc on 03/02/21
HUnHYr It as nearly impossible to find experienced people on this subject, however, you sound like you know what you are talking about! Thanks Comment by seo service on 09/07/13 kuof3j Im grateful for the post. Really Cool. Comment by Sharon on 04/12/10 A georgeous story every boy is nervous the first time buying clothes, Comment by juliej on 01/23/08 sweet story Comment by julie on 04/21/03 a short story bit very fast in the constuction more time and thought plus some more excitment Ie getting caught by parents or wearing them to shcool and getting caught more consequences could be a lot longer and thought out but a good start Comment by Paula on 04/13/03 I just love going shopping and remember asking mom for such wonderful things when I was little. I hope you have more wonderful shopping trips. Comment by Jane Hudson on 04/13/03 My dear I just love shopping in Debemhams in Bristol the girls there are so helpfull I love trying on dresses skirts ect there.I just loved what you wrote. For CDs Tvs TSs Debemham is tops.The make up department is totally fab my dear.Nothing better than shopping fem.I love that you worte all about my number one store |
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