Crystal's Story Site
· Return to Story Index Page · Add your Comments ·

Story Comments by Readers

Showgirl
by Janet L. Stickney

Latest comments are shown at top of page.


Comment by Mariah on 05/17/13
This turned out to be a great story!  I wish I could have been Natalie back in my high school days, It would have been a great pleasure to help raise so much money for charity!

Comment by Vicki Stewart on 04/02/09
  Yet another excellent story. I have read many of your stories, and keep coming back for more.
  I sometimes get the impression that a lot of your stories reflect events in your own life, (maybe I'm wrong), but you seam to have a knack of making them so 'believable'.
  Please give us more!
    Vicki.

Comment by STANLEY MORTON on 08/04/07
DIANE SUTTON SUMS YOUR WRITING UP VERY WELL. BUT YOU CAN ALSO STEP OUTSIDE YOUR STANDARD STORY AND DELIVER A WONDERFUL STORY. HERE, NATALIE IS BORN WHEN A SPECIAL PAGEANT IS HELD, SHE BLOSSOMS AS BILL AND MOM ACCEPT HER. POOR DAD CAN'T WIN THANKS TO BILL.IN A REVISIT-BILL AND NATALIE MUST FORGE AHEAD AS SHE BECOMES A WOMAN

Comment by rone welles on 10/11/06
Ahh  sweet love tender story and  very well written ..
thank you for your time and it is my pleasure to read this
and enjoy your work ....
thank you  Rone  

Comment by Diane Sutton on 11/30/01
It seems that no matter how or what Janet writes it turns out to be a great story with many portions that are always exciting to read. For those who don't think this author has a talent and thinks Janet always tells the same type of stories they should only wish that they could write as well as she can. Janet has many facets that she uses to give many of her stories differences that keep people coming back for more of her works. I for one think that all new authors should read a few of these stories and lean from her.

Comment by Melissa on 11/18/01
Thank you, Janet for another great story. Looking forward to many more.

Comment by Lisa Pagent on 11/14/01
Sweet and touching as always. I always enjoy how our heroines are moved along to the conclusion we all know will happen, and wish to happen (so there, Knipa!).

Comment by Chris on 11/14/01
Janet always writes stories that show great style and craft.  Some good
scenes too.  Thanks.

Comment by Knipa on 11/12/01
Same old same old



Add your Comments

      The importance of reader feedback cannot be overstated.   Authors rely on it to improve their future works, and it gives them the incentive to write more stories if they know that their hard work has been appreciated.  I am not saying that comments must all be lauditory.  Authors often appreciate honest, constructive criticism over simple remarks like 'Great story', although simple praise is appreciated also.  There is no limit on how much you can enter in the 'comments' box.   Sentences will automatically word wrap at the end of the line so please do not use your carriage return/enter key except at the end of your paragraphs.

      It is not necessary to use your real name here, and, email addresses are optional.  Posting your email address will allow the author to thank you for taking the time to post your comments, and/or discuss critiques and address possible concerns. 

      Be forewarned that abusive remarks and language will be removed, and the posters may be banned from this AND other areas of StorySite.



Name :
E-Mail : (Optional & Confidential)
Comments :
 
  

Please report any problems to Crystal