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by Transfemme

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Comment by Lorelei on 01/29/13
Sylvia, cool it, please.  Humiliation?  This evokes atomic-strength effervescence, joy, victory, and overcoming.  Luscious detail.  Especially enjoyed the pronoun switch for KC at one point, as if the dressing had magically re-molecularized him into a girl, legitimizing the experience.  How many boys have been able to be girls in public and be applauded for it?

Comment by Silvia. on 12/03/12
The story is good, but Ms Evelyn Deane should be arrested, turned into man and be sentenced to life imprisonment in a jail for men without parole right.
The end of the story would be better this way, because she humbled KC.
Silvia.

Comment by Rebeca Anne on 09/17/10
  I have wished all of my life to be that young man. Now, you have done that for me in this story. I would be anxious to see if he goes on. Thank you

Comment by Shiela EXCITING creat emotions and Tingle the whole body, on 07/13/10
Continue the Erotic Emotions

Comment by skirtmaster on 10/23/09
I loved all three of your stories, Transfemme. You seem to have an excellent eye for detail, and you're a really good writer; however, I would point out one minor item:  all right is two words instead of one. Another thing is you should bring your stories to a legitimate ending. They're excellent, as far as they go, but you need to drop the other shoe.

Comment by Louisette on 04/19/08
Merci beaucoups, Transfemme! Tres jolie! Tres femme! What wonderfully detailed descriptions! A story sweet, saucy, and outrageously feminine beyond feminine, just like K.C.  A whle new world of "tres fille" has opened up for him. It just shows you how the sexes can be so close, yet light-years apart.  Merci! Au revoir, mon petite!

Comment by Robyn on 04/04/07
I would have given anything to dance the can-can!!  When I was a little boy, I used to sneak looks at a record album with can-can dancers pictured on the cover, and dreamed of high kicking my legs, clad in nylons and showing off my frilly panties!

This is a wonderful lstory, I can feel the sizzle of the nylons and the rush of displaying my intimate undies in front of so many people, especially all of the other boys who always thought I was so tough!

Huggs,
Robyn


Comment by Stefan on 12/12/06
Oh my - what a performance. Loved it my dear. Encore encore.......

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 01/26/06
<<   even now, in his first year of high school,  >>  

At ten, as well as being artistically talented he must have been VERY academically precocious to have skipped at least 3 grades.


Comment by Jenelle on 12/26/05
I am so pleased I found your stories. I like the way they keep flowing. Events just seem to keep moving. Very nice and I look for more. Perhaps you can teach me the Can Can ;)

Comment by rone on 11/02/05
Deeeelightfullllll whats happening next....nice work...
peace  Rone

Comment by CanCan! on 01/26/03
This story exudes such viciously exciting and painful embarassment.
And dancing stories -- wow-- what fun! What is it about dance, and leotards, and girls just having fun?  And there were quite a few "well-dressed" sentences!

Comment by Paula on 01/25/03
Great  story keep up the good work



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