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The Siblings
by Donna Dee

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Comment by Sharon on 08/03/11
What a beautiful story my sister and I made love from a very young age ,we still do and love each other very much.

Comment by Charlie on 04/08/03
Brother sister love is beautiful, my sister and I played sexy games together, but never actually had sex.
Keep up the good work.

Comment by Alana1960 on 02/17/03
I usually avoid stories with magic but this one intrigued me.
It works.

I enjoyed it down to the last word and I thank the author for a really engrossing tale.

Keep up the good work Donna!

Alana

Comment by X on 01/14/03
I have no problem with brother-sister love, as long as it is real love!
 I was born to a woman I called sis for many years.    

Comment by Mardee Louise Prynne on 01/14/03
Danna Dee continues to create fascinating characters.  She dares to venture into tabooed areas yet does so with style and grace.  Her characters become so real, so believable that we dare not judge or reject them.  Well done.
Mardee Louise Prynne

Comment by Briar on 12/25/02
Donna, that was a veery clever eway of handling the "problem" of a sister and brother falling in love wiith each other!  Most ingenious! I also liked how you didnt reveal the SRU hand until the end, to surprise us.  Well written.  Thanks.



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