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Silken Dreams
by Jennifer White

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Comment by MaryLou on 06/21/09
Racy and wild; I could feel my Self way down deep at every step of the "progression."

Comment by J on 04/10/08
Thank you! So well written and I love that they stay together - I am Married to a most understanding Women and lover - 40 years now! So this is a good match to my life. J

Comment by Mandee on 03/27/08
Dear Jennifer
  Gee I will have to read faster as I seem to follow Vickie in my commentary.  She is the master craftslady of femme fiction and high praise from her suggests that you are at home with the author godessess, Jennifer. What more is there to say! I enjoyed the story and it captures the essense of all that we feel as girls in boys bodies.  We want our femininity with as much vital feeling as wanting our relationships to work out to include that vitality.  You know all about that Jennifer and is most certainly shows in this quintessential story of encouraged womanhood in a hubby.
Thank you
Hugs
Mandee

Comment by SassySue on 03/04/08
Jennifer has written and posted another wonderful story.  Personally, I would have preferred Nikki not going all the way.  In that case they wouldn't have had to resort to dildoes at the end, but could have used the real thing.  Nevertheless, I really enjoyed this story and appreciated that the two lead characters not only stayed in love but reaffirmed their marriage vows.

I agree with Vickie that Jennifer should also post her stories on Fictionmania.  That would not only provide her with a larger, appreciative audience, but would also provide a safeguard should one or the other of the sites go down, whether because of attacks or lack of funding and upkeep by the owners.

Keep up the good work,
SS


Comment by Vickie on 03/01/08
I must say, Jennifer, I'm always delighted to see more of your stories posted, especially the kind that conjure with my own favorite characters (a feminizing wife and a willing husband).  Your tales are more unapologetically direct as wish fulfillments, and your wives are generally more loving than mine -- mine can be quite devious in their methods and purposes.  But that carries all the more satisfaction to a reader.  And as with "Silken Dreams" just now, as I read I can supply my own imagined speculations about the feminizing wife's conceivable hidden purposes. We are all seduced in common, yet each in our own way.

I do regret that you take no e-mail -- there are issues of craft we might both enjoy discussing.  For years I'd assumed you were posting prolifically out of an enormous backlog of completed stories -- my own finish far more slowly.  But now, as I see how your stories with a current year's copyright accumulate, I can only marvel at your fecundity as well as the way you sustain clarity and subtlety of style.    Congratulations!

Do consider posting your collected works on Fictionmania as well as Crystal's site.  Spread the joy!




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