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The Silken Family Trap
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Comment by steve on 07/07/15
Stunning story would love to have been mike through this Comment by Sharon on 03/27/10 A georgeous story i used to have sex with both my mother and sister Comment by Stephen on 07/11/09 I'll be masturbating over this one for MONTHS. LOVE the hot sex between mother and son. You have a real knack for erotica. Comment by sissypaul on 04/10/09 A great story from the start. Brother-sister incest is really believable and most enjoyable to read. The final chapter has a totally unexpected twist and is all the more exciting for it. Comment by Trampus63 on 04/22/08 Fantastic Story, every chapter. I think another version of the first chapter could have been where he is kneeling downi in front of his sleeping mother and while he is sniffing her pantyhose, she wakes up and after a few seconds and innitial shock, she grabs his head and holds it under her dress. the sister walks in and sees what is happeing and can hear her brothers muffled cries under mothers dress... Comment by StockingFetish on 01/03/08 Intense stories for some one who has the fetish for stockings. I want you to know I came 3 times reading the stories. Thank you from the bottom of my heart. Comment by juliej on 11/05/07 a sequel would be great where after all is finished they make him into a slave and leave him chained etc in the basement heavy readingin pars but intersting Comment by Angela E. on 08/11/07 How about a sequel where Michelle is introduced to the pleasures of REAL cock? Comment by JoAnne on 05/30/07 You are the greatest !!!!! I have found nothing to compare. Thank you Comment by Lisa M B 36c is beautiful on 04/09/07 One of the most erotic stories I've read. Although I know incest is wrong, I am sure we have all have fantasies about our siblings. Comment by angie on 02/28/07 Loved each part of this story. realy like the part in the office where he did matron fron behind and had anal for the first time and found he enjoy it so much sa well as she did. also loved the sexy nylons and hot high heels Comment by dawn on 02/25/07 Loved the storys For me a great fantasy. Like to see more about in the office. Read that part over and over Comment by juliej on 08/06/05 an intersting story very fast for my liking will needto reread at a later date to understand this clearly Comment by sexy secretary on 11/30/04 hi guys, just a quick post about a site i came across which looks of interest. its about sexy secretary girls wearing pantyhose and stockings with high heels and short skirts. its mainly about the clothing but also looks at why a sexy secretary can have such a positive effect on men. why men dont like to see just a normal secretary in a trouser suit but rather to see a tight skirt with sheer black or suntan pantyhose and black stiletto high heels - this is the true defenition of a sexy secretary. how a sexy secretary should look and act and a thesis about the positive effects in a working environment where a sexy secretary might be seen such as in an office building or at a reception desk or on a customer service point. please visit <a href="http://www.officegirls.net">sexy secretary</a> discussion to read into this analysis of a sexy secretary in more detail. Comment by Paula on 10/15/04 end of part 7 was a twist I didn't see coming Comment by danelle on 10/15/04 I loved the story! Please write more! Comment by Lorraine Roberts on 07/30/04 Refreshing change so far. I mean, usually stories on this site have the hero (heroine??) sliding into an ever deepening pit of femininity (Although stories of those nature do have their place). There are plenty of us in the X-dressing community that are hot-blooded American males with the same desires as any other guy, we just have an unusual hobby. Keep up the good work and don't let our hero get TOO sissified. Comment by Jayne Willard on 07/11/04 WOW! I was excited and ashamed, just like the reast of the family. Comment by Angel O'Hare on 06/20/04 Out of anger with no feeling for his mother at all. Now this is a very, very troubled youth. Not a hormone driven impulse, but much more. Almost everyone has fantasies about their older or younger sister if they have any. Comment by Paula on 05/01/04 Good story and well writen. My personal taste is that though the concept talk about in the summary was good, I'd of prefered it to of been tone down a bit to a lower grade rating. Comment by Colorado Legman on 04/24/04 Please DON'T stop!!! More, more, more!! Comment by Mardee Louise Prynne on 04/23/04 This is a well written, exquisitely detailed treatment of mutual seduction and incest. DO write more. Comment by Satin Slip on 04/07/04 I have dreamed ALL my life that I could do that to my sisters, but in my dreams I feeel the satin of their slips gliding over me, I"m wearing my sisters pink satin slip that is edged in tons of ecru lace. She is wearing her newest blue satin slip. I never got a chance to do this but much much later in life I told one of my sisters what I had always wanted to do and to my surprise she said, "Why didn't you tell me how you felt ???? I wish I Did Comment by Tom on 04/05/04 When a 15 year old boy's hormones make him this horney,anything is possible and because of this I find this story very believable.Wanting to rub against a sister is something a lot of us have fantasised about and Eileen was,well,there.Happily,she enjoyed it and I hope we hear more. Comment by nicola park on 03/28/04 i like the way this story is going and i hope too see the next chapter soon |
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