Not good, but not bad!
Silvia.

I have read a lot of the stories here but this is the first I have to comment about.
You have a talent that I hope is going into other works of art such as this. I must say that I am disappointed that you have not continued with this but I as a writer can understand. Some times you have to just end a story even thought there is always more to tell.

I would love to read more of your work. Is there  anything out there that I can look for?

I really loved this story, I hope very much that you continue it.

Rarely am I tempted to comment on a story these days.  There is so much "dreck" being posted that I almost never find one worth spending the time to read, much less comment, on most of them.

I only found this one because I used the "Posted This Day" option, and it led me to a gem.  I honestly don't remember if I'd read this one before, but if I did, I must have been nuts not to have commented on the superb writing, characterizations, and overall excellence of this beauty.

Worthy in every respect, of favorable comparisons with the best in it's class, I was further chagrined by the fact that there seems to have been no sequel.  I hope that the author will consider adding to this wonderful example of writing skills.

I await with bated breath, and many thanks to Becca for bringing this one out of her mind and presenting it for all of us to enjoy and marvel at.

Hopeful thanks, and many, many huggles from,
Cathy_t_

I REALLY liked this story, one of the better comic based ones I've seen, if not the best. Great work, I hope we eventually see another chapter.

Great Story! I am a uhge fan of DC comics. It's nice to read a story, comic based, that has a Transgender type of theme.

When I read Moon Shadow's death, it was saddening. But, it wasn't forsaken at least. Keith now, I assume, has her powers and most likely the same transgender problem Christopher had. *Chuckles*

I can't wait for Part 2! :)

Er ... more, please?

So far it reads REALLY well, and I'd suggest sending the completed version to DC Comics, they must need the occasional new idea, and this one makes a good one. A TG hero/heroine would make a nice addition to the DC "stable"

Can't wait for the rest - but I guess I'll have to =:o)

Wonderful start. I can't wait to see where you are going to take this.