Bad,bad,bad,bad,bad........................story.
Silvia.

DZ4Yzm hi! hooli?

sorry, I normally don't review twice, but a question jumped into my mind: what's stopping the new girl from killing herself? And what would this...'Crimson Crusader' Bitch do if she came home and found out that she had driven her new slave to suicide?

That's...IT!? Goddess...that...huh? He didn't do anything wrong! All he did was break up with the girl, yes she was hurt. But talk about a complex. Jeeze.

<b>The Bad:</b>
I'll be honest. I didn't like the overly large breasts our hero ended up with, nor in the fact he keeps his manhood.

<b>The Good:</b>
Overall, a great story. I'm a comic book collector, so I always see the Hero win the day. Not in this story. And it's like taking a breath of fresh air. I like seeing the hero every once in a while to be humiliated and defeated. And having it be a girl that the Silver Shield mistreated from his past was brilliant. His powers are cool and I like the fact he uses his brain as well as brawn when he chose to fight crime.

Then we come to her. The woman who caused all this. And now she's being a herione. THere's great story potential with this.

A): While she fights crime, she slowly learns what a true hero is. SHe also learns that holding a grudge against Silver Shield is morally wrong, so in the end she changes him back into a man and returns his opowers...turns herself into the police but the Silver Shield speaks on her part and prvents her from being tto jail. They fall in love.

B): He, she I should say, uses the Equipment at hand that the villianess left ihm with(didn't she lock him in a Lab?). He de2vises a plan to stop her, and it almost fails. But in the end, it works. He takes her down, turns himself back into a man and gets his powers back. He takes her to jail.

C): Using the Lab equipment, he devises the perfect plan to stop her. And...he does. But during the process, they get body swapped. Shield takes her to jail but searxches also for a cure for his, her, condition. But never finds it, Shield is stuck as the woman who did this to him forever.

Anyways, I loved the story, I hope you write more or others add to it or something. Good job. :)

I'm not sure I will be writing more parts to this story, but I gladly open the story up for continuation by other authors.  There are few limits to what can be done in the future, since this is a comic.  But just to set the scene, remember that our hero-ine was left ALONE in her captors LAB.  Also remember that the potion had no side-effects on a WOMAN, which our hero-ine clearly now IS.

Let the catfight begin!  Meow!

Wonderful origin issue here.   I take it the Silver Shield is now a normal powerless female...I mean she-male.   Or wait!   Is her new body still adjusting to her new form.  Will her powers return or will she just discover a way out of her prison as a MAID!    All these and more question might be revealed in the second issue.

Great story and I hope you've got more cooked up for us.

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