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Simon and the Lodger
by Archibald Young

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Comment by Silvia on 10/18/10
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Comment by Dianna on 11/24/07
This is wickedly good and well worth the long wait.
I look forward in anticipation to the next part
Comment by anne-marie on 11/19/07
What a wonderful story, in part like my own experiences but just how I would have dreamt of it. Thank you so much. I look forward to more.

love
Anne-Marie

Comment by Joanne on 11/16/07
Super story, it kept me excited throughout both episodes, there must be more of Simone, please
Comment by Reprobate on 11/16/07
au contraire, mesdames sissies all, what wonderful memories the stories gave me of the Simon/Simone in my life whose lovely coquettishness drove me to the very brink of sexual insanity.  She consumed both my body and my mind.

We travelled, I gifted and inevitably she grew restless for new adventure, new conquests as I in turn wanted to keep her for myself.  And so we parted, memories haunting me still.  It was perhaps for the best, for I shall always have her at the age we met -- wild, chic, flawless, absolutely -- I thought at the the time -- irreplaceable.

But, fortunately, not.  

Comment by sissy tina on 06/12/07
What an adorable,arousing story.I identified with Simon in all his thoughts and feelings and felt jealous of him having two mature lovers.In the next chapter (there HAS to be one)I hope he adopts a suitably girlie name.

             Kisses,tina.

Comment by sissypaula on 06/02/07
you being 16 in the 60s in england made the story very close to me, as i was a 60s boy in london. i bow or maybe curtsy to you. great story. brilliantly told sweetie. and your english was soooo impeccable and flowed so well. i see you will continue. please do but i dont expect the future to be as good. surprise me. xxx
Comment by Dianna on 06/02/07
So delicious, I hope we do not have long to wait for more
Comment by Teri on 06/01/07
I liked it all the way from beginning to end especially the bit about ass to mouth sex with the older fat guy.  It's one of the things that all of us do but seldom are so candid about.


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