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The Siren Song
by Jennifer White

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Comment by suna on 02/08/06
"curing" someone from dressing huh?   alright,  she killed him and it was easy  

I guess she never loved him ..  *sigh*  everyone loses here

glad you have done better stories than this

Comment by Tina on 07/12/04
You continue to be one of the sexiest, most talented, and most prolific writers I have ever read.  There seem no limits to your abilities................

I am sorry to pinch the comments from the dear lady (Sheryl) below but i just have to agree with everything she says. Personally I prefer the stories you write that have no magic or mind control etc, but you write so many that no one can complain, you have something for everybody and long may it continue.  

Thankyou once again, Love Tina xx
Comment by Sheryl S. on 07/12/04
Dear Jennifer:

You continue to be one of the sexiest, most talented, and most prolific writers I have ever read.  There seem no limits to your abilities to develop characters and to put them in especially imaginative situations.  I don't know to what extent you have published beyond erotic and special-needs websites, but if you have, I'd love to read whatever you have written. Al/Julia's emotions and regrets were very real, and evolution consistent with the situations.  Thanks for cover such a broad spectrum of stories.

Love & Huggz,
Sheryl S.
Comment by Sissy Ricki on 07/10/04
Absolutly loved it! I hope yo write more sequels! I'm a real fan and I would love to be in one of yor stories! XOXOXOXO,Sissy Ricki


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