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Sissy Bobbie
by Catherine Murray

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Comment by Pervette on 07/10/03
A moving, powerful story.  But...there seems to be a break in the
continuity between the two parts. (And the name has changed from
Bobbie to Bobby.) At the end of Part 1 you say you will fill in
more details later, so I guess that explains the discontinuity, but
the second part would have read much better if you had supplied a
brief passage to bridge the gap & establish the time. Otherwise, a
good story, rings true.


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