Very, very bad story.

Lovely story and a nice touch with the women turning each other on as Mistress Elizabeth's maid cum little girl Cissy is forced to watch. I guess poor Cissy did end up with a public spanking after all.

excellent i just want that to happento me

an interesting short story but again its to short iwould like to know how he got in such a predickement

Wonderful, refreshing story...really enjoyed all the parts and the interaction with the invited guests.  I did not mind the butt plug, but can see where some would question the need...guess I saw it as a way of getting played with on both ends!

What makes this story different?

Our sissy is uncomfortable with the situation, but the people do not abuse her beyond the ostensible situation nor debase her as a person.

There seems to be a strict relationship between the-adult-in-charge and the sissy, but there is no malice expressed. --- Even when Cissy knows that she is probably going to be punished, she seems not to dread it too much since it is within some previously laid down rules.

I loved this little story!  I could feel the little sissy's excitement and intense electrifying humiliation before this group of sexy and superior women.  The sissy certainly is well looked after.  I do hope you write more like this one.
Sissy Patricia

He is such a lovely sweet submissive kissable girly-boy. Wasn't sure about the butt plug. I loved the girl-girl action i the background. This story made me very wet.

A very nice short story.  You chose a difficult perspective to write from, but you did fairly well at making it work.  You did remarkably well with grammer and imagery for a first story.  The only thing I would caution you about is to either explain or eliminate storyline inconsitencies.

For example, from the perspective of a little girl sissy in rhumba panties, stockings and a garter belt don't quite fit.  You might have explained them as necessary for the ritual that would occur later, but the ritual didn't make sense either.  Little girls don't generally get butt-plugged.  Again, we need some background to make that action valid.  

I'm not saying that you need to eliminate those elements, just give us some background as to how they fit into the story.  Perhaps the "little sissy" is being trained to become a "real woman".  Putting motivation behind action makes your story more credible.

Anyway, it is a minor issue.  Very nice first.  Keep it up.

-Ami