This was very good they say leave them wanting more is the best way to end a story  loved it a lot

I love the story so far but will charlene come back as charlene and what happened hope the next chapter wont be long in coming....keep up the good work

This is cruel. Leading us into here, setting it all up with a Major Cliffhanger. And then abandon the story.

Gah. What a turn-off.

Jo-Anne

Noooooooooooooooooo you cant leave it there. PLEASE let there be a 2nd part. Its that great it would be a shame if there isn't another part.

Oh No!!!  To be continued????  No, it can't be!!!  Just when the crux of the whole story is about to pass, the story quits. :(   Gee, I love what I have read. I sure hope the rest of the story comes soon.  I was worried that the public officials would get bogged down in the usual red tape, but at the end of the text it seems as though the cavalry has arrived.  Do the couple get arrested?  Does the story make the evening news?  From the operation, the camera work, and with the follow through, there are many more than just those two involved in this operation, doctors, lawyers, cameramen, technicians.  Do they too get arrested?  Does Charleen revert to Charlie?  Tune in again next week for the next exciting chapter of "Sissy Reprieve".
Thank you for sharing this with us.  

Good story

I like the G-Mans stories.  Whille I may not allways agree with where he going at times,  I keep it firmly in mind that this is fantasy.
While your add-on is good,  Y cant help but wonder if you were trying to send a message or if it was your take on his story and the way you thought it should end.