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The Sissy Spy
by DJ711

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Comment by Silvia. on 08/31/11
I liked the end of the story.

Comment by Annon on 12/04/08
I liked it, although at first a bit disturbing a very satisfying end

Comment by Bondwritr on 09/13/07
The set-ups you design are OK, but you should get editors, or post on other sites/ forums before you post here. Hence you'd be able to get feedback to let you know what needs being worked out.

In this particular story, it would be good to know James a bit more so his strong reactions may be better understood. And there are also some continuity problems. Don't despair, and you'll do well.


Comment by DJ on 09/12/07
This was definitly a rush job sorry.



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