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Sissy Trap
by Josie Brian

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Comment by j on 01/21/10
I wish i was him!

Comment by your friend on 01/04/10
if this is true can you add pictures of the dress

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Comment by anon on 08/12/08
i liked it, is it a true story??

if so, your ingenuity pleases me.


Comment by juliej on 08/03/07
the story is great but needs to be completed thankyou

Comment by rone welles on 11/19/06
  Got him  didn,t you ....  he he  ... well what is next does he want to be a girl or not ? at fourteen he should make the descion one way or the other and maybe tell mom and sis thats what he wants.

you left a lot of openings thank you for telling the story...

XO  rone


Comment by juliej on 01/25/06
a great story keep up the great work well done more please

Comment by toby on 08/09/04
rated r? why, for either story for that matter

Comment by SassySue on 08/07/04
I agree with the other reviewers.  This is a good story with a very clever story line that deserves to be continued with Martin in more predicaments and punished by his mother and sister.

While I agree with Joe Smith's comments and Josie could have done a little better job of proofreading(e.g. "hear" instead of "here"), this was an excellent effort for a first time poster.

Keep up the good work!

SS

Comment by Joe smith on 08/06/04
I loved the story especially how the crotch peace trapped him even more then hoped for, I wish it was me. It's amazing but you should have really tried to give it more of a "holy crap" feeling. Hope to see more of your work.

Comment by Jane Hudson on 08/04/04
Good story wonder what mum and sis would say if he said I want to dress and live as a girl all the time that would of been interesting

Comment by Diane on 08/04/04
I love the concept!  I only wish there was more time spent on his predicament before he was caught!

Comment by Annabel on 08/04/04
Dear Josie
I loved this story - it's so original and beautifully written.  And so real - both the boy and girl characters!
Keep writing!
Hugs, Annabel

Comment by juliej on 08/04/04
a very sensible sister what a devious trap to set i was amazed how it was set up so easy,well done josie i would like to hear another part too this story weather martin learnt his lesson or if he tried again and got caught by his sister and what sort of punishment to give him i would have liked to been martin myself well done great story more please

Comment by Pam on 08/04/04
Yes, can't wait until we go to the city to shop in this story  giggles



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