this was a great story which i really enjoyed martins humilation was briliant  i would like to se it continued in the same tense and for martin to rip his trousers again badley and would love to read how his mother caried out her threat brilliant

no i do not write on this site as i am not very good at writing

Thanks for the comment everyone. I was never happy with this follow up to my first story. It was a bit rushed and I have wanted to re-write it for a while. Just never found the time.
rone welles - does he want to be a girl? Well who wouldn't? Girls are the best!
JulieJ, thanks for all the messages. Do you write on this site?

this again is a good story but needs to be finished

   Yes well we now know that mom and sis took care of the problem,,
but you still left a hole and the story is not finnished yet..

does he want to be a girl ?

let us know    thank you XO   Rone

a seconed read of this story was great well done its a pity that you did not add more to this story like if his sister was that upset with him she would trap him or frame him to teach him a lesson girls can be very devious well done great story

a good part to the first of this story wwell written and described his mother had great ideas with regardto this matter a leeson to learn the hard way

If boy  goes 100% TG or the other way .A yob thug or worse.Then well mum sis you only got yourselfs to blame I been both first total thug now per op TS 180 turn round  oh yes only a bit my dear of a change.If you back this kid in to a corner he will go girl or thump boot  yahoo thug.I went into my Secondary Modern a real girlly bit of a sissy boy after some hard core kickings and a teacher who said it would make a man of me I became the one the worse kids there not bully but fighting nicking joy riding the full 9 yards .Only my dad stopping going inside not the bloody useless teachers. Back anyone into a corner and they will turn one way or other. I can see this kid going one way or other story I know but I know school day are some of the worse day s of your life.

<<  "You have every reason to be angry with your brother, Josie. But I'm going to ask you to keep this story secret from everyone. Martin is only 14, if this got out he would lose all his friends, lose respect from everyone who knows him; even his teachers would treat him differently. This could ruin the rest of his life and he's a bright kid, he could have a good life. Please Josie don't tell anyone – for me?"  >>


Good story, but a public shopping trip with him obviously a boy wearing a visable bra and coming out of changing rooms wearing girls' clothing he was trying on?  Makes one question his mom's sincerity in the above.  The pics kelly took were probably circulating before they left the store.  She should have made him chose whether to go shopping as a sissy boy or to allow them to make him over into a convincing girl for the trip.