Excellent continuation from the first story. The stunt pulled by the girls sends chills through your veins. You are one of few who close out the story with an upbeat ending. I find this far more appealing than the standard submission seen by the terrorized/humiliated target. Keep up the good, creative writing.

I just can not understand why some people write things with so much hate and humilliation, those stories leave a bad taste. I know we can talk so much about the intentions of the authors to bring up feelings, and that they want to put down the happy endings, or even try to get out with those internal conflicts; but I always belive that the people has the tendency to grow up to the adversity, and that what goes comes around. So thats why I'm become a fan of your work, Keep developing those write skills, good work

I still hate the first story, but this does put some of it right...being a scrawny kid myself i was constantly beat up by bullies but i at least used my head and hired the biggest bully to protect me for 2 packs of cigs a week...now i have to try and erase the story from memory but the follow up helps

A very heart breaking story with joy mixed in with a discovery of a new daughter.  It is always sad when there is abuse in a family regardless of the one responsible or the cause.  I was happy to see that the child prospered and that the daughter was recoverying even with the prospect of answering legally for her actions.  This story teaches one basic truth:  "With privilege comes responsibility!"  When one is born into a family it is a privilege and therefore that family should be a loving family and each member has the responsibilty to provide their share of love that all will be happy.  It is tragic indeed when this fails, as this story demonstrates.  A very well written story even though it was somewhat short.  Keep up the good work.

I'm so happy to see an ending to that story. It hurts me when people use non-consensual humiliation and degradation. Especially for minor offenses. Shy's story made me lose two night's of sleep. Thank you for putting it right sugar.

  Very good follow up .... the story line followed  the main plot from the first story ...huh ...  anyway well done sometimes the good guys win ...  the bad guy lost this time big time....you could have made it a little longer...

thank you for your writting and shareing with us ..
peace Rone :)

Genius! I loved how you actually had the girls feminizing him/her punished. As a brother I know how that feels. Thanks for bieng the only author so far that punished them for feminizing a boy/girl. Over all this was a great story!

It was a rushed story but the point came across very well. I liked both the first part and the second part of the story tell the truth.

The very last part of where you said that the world needs more of her is very correct. The world as you said in different words of course needs much more understanding and kindness! Like I said yu got the point across. Now if you can write a well told story of something similar you will have something!

I like the basic premise of the story - illustrating the logical consequences of the situation painted by Shy - I'm a fan of Myria's "Consequences" series (ca. 2000).  

However,the story seems a bit rushed, especially at the end.  And the parents' reaction seems rather overdone - e.g. turning on the older daughter before they'd even heard her side of the story.  For all they _knew_ up to that time, she could have had nothing to do with this.  (Remember, the mother was totally unaware that her former son had been sustaining regular beatings.)

The run-on paragraphs actually made it a little hard to read, too.

Overall, I think this could have been a great follow-up to Shy's story, had a little more time been spent on it.

Deni

My dear good story wonder if Dana and Michlle become sisters or friends or if she come out and does something worse.

Whoops.

Of course, I meant to say "Danielle".

I'm terrible with names. :(

That'll teach me to post without checking for errors first.

My apologies.  

Good story, Denise.

However, I think that it would've been more realistic if the elder sister and her friends had been arrested and charged with felony child abuse.

I could've done without the run-on sentences, although they didn't detract from my interest in the story--they just made it more complicated to read.

One small correction, though--"Lanacaine" is a trade name for a commercial version of the topical anesthetic Benzocaine.

I believe you meant to say "Lidocaine"; although the latter can also be used as an anesthetic, it is most commonly used in the treatment of cardiac difficulties, such as heart attacks-- which, from the context, the main character suffered as a result of an allergic reaction to the paint which his sister used on him.

cute. I read that *other* story that seems to have inspired this one. Thanks! It's nice to know that nasty people don't always win.

I love a happy ending

I sent you an email with my thoughts on this.
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Angel