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Sister-1
by Samantha Michelle

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Comment by Silvia. on 04/17/12
Sherry should be hanged for what she did to sam.
Very, very bad story.

Comment by eric grant on 08/10/10
that was a good story i wash i was him/she

Comment by Madge on 10/17/09
Loved your story. I think you hooked me.

Comment by Polly on 06/26/09
What a beautiful story. Wish I'd had a sister that got even like that.

Comment by Aleesha on 04/20/09
I loved your story. Perhaps you could of wrote more of how Samantha enjoyed her feminine self and how she developed into becoming a woman. Thanks.

Comment by Janice Lynn on 07/05/07
Loved the story. Very funny regarding the sibling rivalry and antics. Kinda reminded me of myself and my two brothers and sister and what we used to do to each other. Didn't care as far as what happened to Sam, but that could have been interesting now that I think about it. Please follow up with Sam and her life. LOL,
J-Lynn  

Comment by juliej on 12/31/06
a great fun story with a serious side to it dont upset you sister touch or you might end up like charles did what a great story

Comment by Rone welles on 12/19/06
  well done fun story .... shows insite and humor at what kids can do to each other ....  fun read   .....do some more writing in this form ...

thank you for sharing  ....  XO :) rone


Comment by juliej on 08/08/05
great story s well written it could go on a bit more but it was good to readecond read

Comment by SassySue on 09/15/03
An interesting sexy story of revenge gone wrong.  I would love to have sensitive breasts and an active heterosexual love life like our hero(ine).   Given how well things worked out for Sam it is clear why he was able to forgive his sister.

Keep up the good work.

SS

Comment by julie on 04/18/03
sister getting her revenge that went to far resulting into a complete change the begining of a good story it takes a lot of getting used to and trying to forgive his sister shelly well done more please

Comment by Nellie D on 07/21/01
A story of unwanted changed and the reaction to it. The end result began as a series of pranks that turned into a brother - sister duel. Samantha has created an interesting plot line.



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